女儿的宏文

本帖于 2012-11-25 07:10:06 时间, 由普通用户 旖旎风光 编辑

I have been interested in economics since my primary school days, when I enjoyed playing computer games, such as “Lemonade Stand” and “Roller Coaster Tycoon”. I shifted this passion from the virtual world to reality in 2009, when my friend and I started a blogshop selling second-hand music albums. It was difficult to generate sales and my friend soon gave up. However, I persevered and over the next two years transformed the blogshop into a top supplier for stylish watches among the nation’s blogshops.

This experience gave me a genuine interest in economics, as I came to realise that operating a blogshop takes much more than creativity and dedication. There is a need for economics knowledge—particularly microeconomics, to understand how firms compete in a market to generate profits. Since blogshops operate in a monopolistically competitive market, for a blogshop to remain competitive, it is crucial to undertake intensive product development and promotion. Armed with my experience in handling an actual business and the economics knowledge I had learnt in college, I took part in the HCI-GSK Entrepreneurship Best Business Idea and was one of the finalists after going through several rounds of product innovation presentation. This not only improved my communication and creative thinking skills, it also gave me an opportunity to learn from business entrepreneurs the importance of the price mechanism in business decisions to ensure that a business is successful through maximising revenues, sales and profits, depending on the respective goal of each firm.

Beyond economics in school, it is fascinating for me to have observed the recent economic development in China. It is fast becoming the second largest economy in the world, just as it was during the great Ming Dynasty. During those times, silver taels were abundant and transactions often involved millions of pounds of silver.Then, China enjoyed sustained and stable economic growth from AD 1402 to AD1622, according to “China’s GDP in the Ming Dynasty”, an economics paper by H.Guan and D. D. Li. This was made possible as China’s economy was carefully controlled and managed by an emperor with absolute power. However today, despite a similar level of control, China faces serious problems of income inequality and inflation, caused by rapid economic growth, the printing of fiat money in the West and the central government placing economic growth as the highest priority for provincial governments. Due to complexities in the economy today, it may not be a realistic aspiration for China to replicate its past glory, as various economies are closely linked by globalisation, but still more stable economic growth is beneficial. Hence, there seems to be an urgent need to use government policies to further dampen the government’s stimulus-driven high growth in order to achieve long-term sustainable economic growth. It would interest me to see if these policies can solve the problems of income inequality and inflation and also avoid a possible economic hard-landing.

As I am very interested in the financial aspect of economics, I would also like to take up finance related courses in the economics syllabus when possible. Last year, I was the treasurer for my team in a Citibank-YMCA fundraising project, drawing up budget plans and dealing with financial statements, and we raised $7000 for the The Association for the Deaf. Other than doing my part for the community, I learnt the basics of finance, including managing resources and acquiring funds. 

I hope to study economics in university. I am inspired to apply my learning to my own society and region, especially given the fact that my city is one of the world's top financial centres. With the necessary aptitude and interest, I wish to further my economics knowledge at degree level.



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    is she applying for mba? -princessonthepea- 给 princessonthepea 发送悄悄话 princessonthepea 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 11/25/2012 postreply 01:25:32

    No,applying for a place in university -insight777- 给 insight777 发送悄悄话 insight777 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 11/25/2012 postreply 01:29:49

    这到底是什么意思?applying for a place in univeristy? What are you -笑薇.- 给 笑薇. 发送悄悄话 (14 bytes) () 11/25/2012 postreply 07:35:00

    申请大学本科:经济与金融。 -insight777- 给 insight777 发送悄悄话 insight777 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 11/25/2012 postreply 07:59:50

    你女儿好厉害哦。这是申请PhD吗?为什么不去申请MBA呢? -旖旎风光- 给 旖旎风光 发送悄悄话 旖旎风光 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 11/25/2012 postreply 07:04:48

    哈哈,申请大学本科:经济与金融。 -insight777- 给 insight777 发送悄悄话 insight777 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 11/25/2012 postreply 07:32:06

    哦,可你女儿文章里说她在college学的econ的课啊,是在高中时去college听课的? -旖旎风光- 给 旖旎风光 发送悄悄话 旖旎风光 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 11/25/2012 postreply 08:16:53

    她上过大学预科,叫Junior College。 -insight777- 给 insight777 发送悄悄话 insight777 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 11/25/2012 postreply 08:23:41

    我严于律人。看看这句: -壮士- 给 壮士 发送悄悄话 (251 bytes) () 11/25/2012 postreply 07:23:37

    不仅绕口。语法上,是个病句。 -壮士- 给 壮士 发送悄悄话 (0 bytes) () 11/25/2012 postreply 07:28:46

    应该不是。Thanks any way -insight777- 给 insight777 发送悄悄话 insight777 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 11/25/2012 postreply 07:58:43

    不是小病,是大病。 -壮士- 给 壮士 发送悄悄话 (0 bytes) () 11/25/2012 postreply 08:36:54

    绝对不是病句,语法没问题 -今天是个好天气- 给 今天是个好天气 发送悄悄话 (0 bytes) () 11/25/2012 postreply 12:16:17

    :) -旖旎风光- 给 旖旎风光 发送悄悄话 旖旎风光 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 11/25/2012 postreply 07:30:19

    可以请人雕琢一下,感觉会很不一样 -vest2005- 给 vest2005 发送悄悄话 (68 bytes) () 11/25/2012 postreply 07:36:22

    应该不是。很多处使用英式英文拼法。 -壮士- 给 壮士 发送悄悄话 (0 bytes) () 11/25/2012 postreply 07:38:37

    英文非母语的人会写出这种句子来。感觉像是在翻译。让人看不懂。 -cafeaulait- 给 cafeaulait 发送悄悄话 (0 bytes) () 11/25/2012 postreply 21:14:16

    母语是英文和中文,双母语 -insight777- 给 insight777 发送悄悄话 insight777 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 11/25/2012 postreply 23:54:05

    谢谢分享. 好奇一下,这文章 -clover4- 给 clover4 发送悄悄话 (341 bytes) () 11/25/2012 postreply 08:13:50

    估计是国际生。语法错误太多。很多句子主语混乱。 -壮士- 给 壮士 发送悄悄话 (0 bytes) () 11/25/2012 postreply 08:16:42

    上大学预科,Junior College。一个人写。 -insight777- 给 insight777 发送悄悄话 insight777 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 11/25/2012 postreply 08:19:54

    那是否她从别的书/文章上引用了别人的句子段落? 尤其在读中国这个段落时, -clover4- 给 clover4 发送悄悄话 (146 bytes) () 11/25/2012 postreply 08:32:02

    谢谢。应该是自己写。当然学校admission consultant 给过她意见,然后自己修改过。 -insight777- 给 insight777 发送悄悄话 insight777 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 11/25/2012 postreply 08:37:56

    文章还是材料可以引起注意,文章结构需要大幅度修改, -春雨潇潇11- 给 春雨潇潇11 发送悄悄话 (128 bytes) () 11/25/2012 postreply 08:19:00

    Thank you. Food for thought -insight777- 给 insight777 发送悄悄话 insight777 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 11/25/2012 postreply 08:21:48

    恕直言,这文章真是宏文,太空洞,她有 -Ruoruomom- 给 Ruoruomom 发送悄悄话 (30 bytes) () 11/25/2012 postreply 08:29:51

    这是因为很多学校想要看理论知识的掌握,分析能力的高低。 -insight777- 给 insight777 发送悄悄话 insight777 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 11/25/2012 postreply 08:40:50

    Need better transitions between topics. And runnig a shop is not -soundofsilence- 给 soundofsilence 发送悄悄话 (0 bytes) () 11/25/2012 postreply 08:46:14

    主要是因为受字数的限制,很多多余的字句已经被删去了。 -insight777- 给 insight777 发送悄悄话 insight777 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 11/25/2012 postreply 08:58:12

    恕直言,如果是申请大学本科,不该这样写法的。不要想象AO会象你一样满含热泪来仔细读。 -princessonthepea- 给 princessonthepea 发送悄悄话 princessonthepea 的博客首页 (139 bytes) () 11/25/2012 postreply 09:01:41

    我说句客气话吧。因为是国际生,学校不会因为此文录取她,也不会因为此文拒绝她。 -壮士- 给 壮士 发送悄悄话 (0 bytes) () 11/25/2012 postreply 09:14:22

    刚刚收到一流大学的conditional offer和interview邀请 -insight777- 给 insight777 发送悄悄话 insight777 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 11/25/2012 postreply 23:55:06

    蛮好的,建议她加一点具体数据到“top blogshop supplier" 上,比如一年多少$$.再给你几个建议 -Manymore- 给 Manymore 发送悄悄话 (532 bytes) () 11/25/2012 postreply 10:06:40

    申请人经历很强,可惜写得不出彩。 -ninja4118- 给 ninja4118 发送悄悄话 (0 bytes) () 11/25/2012 postreply 10:09:13

    真正经历很强,一般都能写出彩来 -beachlver- 给 beachlver 发送悄悄话 beachlver 的博客首页 (58 bytes) () 11/25/2012 postreply 16:31:57

    Lots of good ideas, but need to work on structure and wording -ZoyaWashington- 给 ZoyaWashington 发送悄悄话 (2250 bytes) () 11/25/2012 postreply 11:32:50

    Spot-on. -beachlver- 给 beachlver 发送悄悄话 beachlver 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 11/25/2012 postreply 16:41:48

    Add a hook at the beginning to make it interesting -nonamewriter- 给 nonamewriter 发送悄悄话 (378 bytes) () 11/25/2012 postreply 12:20:57

    比较中国式的写法。如果是命题作文,文式没有问题。如果是common app的自由命题作文, -就为这个- 给 就为这个 发送悄悄话 (61 bytes) () 11/25/2012 postreply 13:18:10

    这篇文章太"作"了 -beachlver- 给 beachlver 发送悄悄话 beachlver 的博客首页 (66 bytes) () 11/25/2012 postreply 16:27:18

    Very plain essay. Did not see any passion -springsummer321- 给 springsummer321 发送悄悄话 (0 bytes) () 11/25/2012 postreply 16:39:57

    您女儿是新加坡的吗?可以问下是哪所中学毕业的? -Drunkcrab- 给 Drunkcrab 发送悄悄话 Drunkcrab 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 11/25/2012 postreply 17:11:02

    写实用文该采用analytical 方式,而小说用contextual. -晨雾飘渺- 给 晨雾飘渺 发送悄悄话 晨雾飘渺 的博客首页 (359 bytes) () 11/26/2012 postreply 06:44:40

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