租客在签lease时要求改条款， 大家看看应该怎么写

原始的关于break lease是这样的

16. LIABILITY FOR RENT: Lessee shall continue paying rent and
all other charges for the Premises to the end of the term of this lease,
whether or not the Premises becomes vacant by reason of
abandonment, breach of the lease by Lessee, wrongful termination by
Lessee or if the Lessee has been evicted for breach of this lease, to the
extent said obligation for rent has not been mitigated, abated or
discharged, in whole or in part, by any law or ordinance.
Notwithstanding any of the provisions contained in this section, the
Landlord shall make a good faith effort to re-let the Premises (but not
in priority to other vacancies) and if the Premises is re-let, Lessee
shall be responsible for the balancer of the rent, costs, advertising
costs and attorney’s fees) in connection therewith.

现在要改成提前四十五天通知，交一个月罚款。我不知道怎样写才好。

所有跟帖： 

• 要60天，罚2个月，说是行规。。你是房东，你作主 -piris1987- ♀ (0 bytes) () 04/26/2018 postreply 09:47:33

• For early termination, -gqc- ♀ (293 bytes) () 04/26/2018 postreply 10:50:26

• might not be legal -柠檬椰子汁- ♂ (97 bytes) () 04/26/2018 postreply 11:19:27