You ask me when to come back I can not tell
the pond is now sweling by the Mount with the autumn night rain
And you ask me when would we trim the candle by the west window night
do we Once said it would be when the Mount was in a night autumn rain
那个?是什么意思?我来在你的版本基础上翻译一个:
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我们看,这样就压上韵了。凑合的吧。也不能要求太高。
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08/11/2021 postreply
16:41:01
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谢谢立兄的回应。那是我不知道寄北是什么意思,所以用问号取代。我喜欢你的版本里那种对话的感觉的引入!
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08/11/2021 postreply
16:47:06
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第一个秋雨,也可以改为with the fall of the night rain
-立-
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08/11/2021 postreply
16:51:51
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With the autumn rainfall at night?
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08/11/2021 postreply
16:55:55