那是锦上添花，但最后押韵属于标配

Shall I compare thee to a summer's day?
Thou art more lovely and more temperate.
Rough winds do shake the darling buds of May,
And summer’s lease hath all too short a date.
Sometime too hot the eye of heaven shines,
And often is his gold complexion dimmed;
And every fair from fair sometime declines,
By chance, or nature’s changing course, untrimmed;
But thy eternal summer shall not fade,
Nor lose possession of that fair thou ow’st,
Nor shall death brag thou wand'rest in his shade,
When in eternal lines to Time thou grow'st.
    So long as men can breathe, or eyes can see,
    So long lives this, and this gives life to thee.

 

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• 啥锦上添花啊！您得去看看14行诗的格律要求了！ -行者一路歌- ♂ (0 bytes) () 05/13/2021 postreply 10:09:59

• 弄个例子出来吧，看看莎士比亚有哪首14行诗句子结尾不是押韵的 -龙湖山- ♂ (844 bytes) () 05/13/2021 postreply 10:22:14

• 我的译诗头两句是句尾协音韵，后两句是句首的常韵 -行者一路歌- ♂ (0 bytes) () 05/13/2021 postreply 11:48:35

• 知道为什么吗？ 因为西文句子比较长，所以句中押韵比中文诗词重要性高。 -行者一路歌- ♂ (0 bytes) () 05/13/2021 postreply 10:13:43