我更看重后两句。悠闲则意败。
起句再琢磨一下。
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有道理,就按老师的意思,安恬,悠然,大谢!:)
-安静-
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06/19/2010 postreply
13:53:04
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私以为,肃更近诗的原意,也更配“春生”。霸王兄此议更精准。
-依依汉南-
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06/19/2010 postreply
15:32:44
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好,听从两位好建议:)
-安静-
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06/19/2010 postreply
23:35:49
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