minor issue

"wrinkled and fissured": how about "wrinkled and twisted"? Any fissure would be paralyzing, if not fatal. I know this is a poem, not neuroscience. Overall, it reads very nice. I thought you had a typo, gray, and then realize you are in UK.

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• 颤音应当在美国。：）去查了查，冯墟应当是记反了，gray一般是US写法，grey是UK写法。。。 -尘凡无忧- ♀ (0 bytes) () 09/23/2022 postreply 17:39:15

• 应该用 grey , 因为我念念不忘 fifty shades of grey -颤音- ♂ (0 bytes) () 09/23/2022 postreply 17:43:46

• LOL -尘凡无忧- ♀ (0 bytes) () 09/23/2022 postreply 17:44:50

• 我错。在两国，这两种拼法都可以。只恨识字不多啊。 -冯墟- ♂ (0 bytes) () 09/23/2022 postreply 17:50:05

• 哈哈，很坦诚。。。 -花似鹿葱- ♀ (0 bytes) () 09/24/2022 postreply 05:07:01

• 谢谢您的意见，我就是瞎玩，没有严谨的科学态度 -颤音- ♂ (0 bytes) () 09/23/2022 postreply 17:41:39

• 不是大问题。Sylvia Plath读高中时，老师不认同她对朝霞的描述。过两天，她七点钟准时把老师揪去一起看日出。当然是 -冯墟- ♂ (18 bytes) () 09/23/2022 postreply 17:53:15