The grooves you carve 关于唱片和解剖

The grooves you carve

The grooves you carve
half a mile long
in gray scale
major and minor
flat and sharp
sing chord and dischord
born ages ago
from the colored waves
from your fingers combing through my black hair
and the sparks that blind my eyes

The grooves you carve
wind in my cortex
wrinkled and fissured
deep and shallow
The grooves you carve
sing eternally
although you vanish with the sapphire stylus

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Darya Falay Goldmann - I like the style and word combination you used. Really interesting to read and feel the poem

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• minor issue -冯墟- ♂ (273 bytes) () 09/23/2022 postreply 17:09:35

• 颤音应当在美国。：）去查了查，冯墟应当是记反了，gray一般是US写法，grey是UK写法。。。 -尘凡无忧- ♀ (0 bytes) () 09/23/2022 postreply 17:39:15

• 应该用 grey , 因为我念念不忘 fifty shades of grey -颤音- ♂ (0 bytes) () 09/23/2022 postreply 17:43:46

• LOL -尘凡无忧- ♀ (0 bytes) () 09/23/2022 postreply 17:44:50

• 我错。在两国，这两种拼法都可以。只恨识字不多啊。 -冯墟- ♂ (0 bytes) () 09/23/2022 postreply 17:50:05

• 哈哈，很坦诚。。。 -花似鹿葱- ♀ (0 bytes) () 09/24/2022 postreply 05:07:01

• 谢谢您的意见，我就是瞎玩，没有严谨的科学态度 -颤音- ♂ (0 bytes) () 09/23/2022 postreply 17:41:39

• 不是大问题。Sylvia Plath读高中时，老师不认同她对朝霞的描述。过两天，她七点钟准时把老师揪去一起看日出。当然是 -冯墟- ♂ (18 bytes) () 09/23/2022 postreply 17:53:15

• 猫猫请来翻译 -nearby- ♂ (0 bytes) () 09/23/2022 postreply 17:18:49

• 哈哈哈，有万能的谷歌 -颤音- ♂ (0 bytes) () 09/24/2022 postreply 09:13:34

• 浪漫啊，缠绵啊。。。：） -尘凡无忧- ♀ (0 bytes) () 09/23/2022 postreply 17:34:21

• 谢谢无忧 -颤音- ♂ (0 bytes) () 09/24/2022 postreply 09:13:52

• 纯净，忧伤，古典。360度转体赞。：） -ling_yin_shi- ♂ (0 bytes) () 09/23/2022 postreply 18:05:25

• 谢谢灵隐兄 -颤音- ♂ (0 bytes) () 09/24/2022 postreply 09:14:17

• 喜欢唱片 :-) -七斓- ♀ (0 bytes) () 09/23/2022 postreply 19:28:49

• 谢谢 -颤音- ♂ (0 bytes) () 09/24/2022 postreply 09:14:35