A nice read. here my $0.02:)

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回答: 翻译接力：因为我无法为死亡止步 由 冯墟 于 2022-09-22 18:44:46

因为我不能停止走向死亡

Because I could not stop for Death –
因为我不能停止走向死亡—

He kindly stopped for me –
他亲切地为我停留——

The Carriage held but just Ourselves –
这辆马车可容纳的只有我们自己——

And Immortality. 
还有永生。

(The first stanza)

 

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• thanks! -冯墟- ♂ 给 冯墟 发送悄悄话 冯墟 的博客首页 (701 bytes) () 09/23/2022 postreply 07:41:52

• you did a good job thanks for sharing your art:) -忒忒绿- ♂ 给 忒忒绿 发送悄悄话 忒忒绿 的博客首页 (214 bytes) () 09/23/2022 postreply 07:45:00

• a beautiful thing about reading a poem is you can have -冯墟- ♂ 给 冯墟 发送悄悄话 冯墟 的博客首页 (236 bytes) () 09/23/2022 postreply 10:04:31

• she together w Death passed the schl, fields, graves? no -忒忒绿- ♂ 给 忒忒绿 发送悄悄话 忒忒绿 的博客首页 (147 bytes) () 09/23/2022 postreply 10:12:00

• that has been the mainstream interpretation. Also mine. -冯墟- ♂ 给 冯墟 发送悄悄话 冯墟 的博客首页 (91 bytes) () 09/23/2022 postreply 10:21:38

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