A door in the desert

A door in the desert

A door in the desert
stands wide and tall
alone without attached wall
But no one dares to avert
because people see through it an oasis
because people are chased by a crisis

Let's line up and walk through the door
Chants from the front of the crowd
Why can't we walk around the door
A murmur from the middle of the crowd
from a blind man's blind boar

vague © 10 hours ago, rhyme   
 

Likes: Ken doll, HeartLess Smile

HeartLess Smile - Sounded like something you would find in alice and wonderland. What a fun intriguing poem, good job and keep writing.

4 hours ago

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• 赞想象力。。。：） -尘凡无忧- ♀ (0 bytes) () 07/13/2022 postreply 13:20:27

• 再赞颤音，韵律和意境到很妙 -忒忒绿- ♂ (0 bytes) () 07/13/2022 postreply 15:24:00

• A crowd in a desert, a boar at the door。。意境玄乎啊。赞 -东风再起- ♂ (0 bytes) () 07/13/2022 postreply 15:42:50

• 点赞！ -nearby- ♂ (0 bytes) () 07/13/2022 postreply 17:52:43

• 谢谢所有美言，俺就是想说不能一根筋 -颤音- ♂ (0 bytes) () 07/13/2022 postreply 19:43:18

• 赞！寓意深刻，blind sees better than those who can see. -CBA7- ♀ (0 bytes) () 07/13/2022 postreply 20:33:45

• 谢谢 -颤音- ♂ (0 bytes) () 07/14/2022 postreply 21:04:08