孩子在学校被欺负受伤，请大伙给看看这样写行不行

来源: 关键字 于 2009-03-26 15:03:08 [] [博客] [旧帖] [给我悄悄话] 阅读数 : (919 bytes)

下面是写给老师和校长的信，请各位给指正一下。如果可能，请帮我修改一下QQH给我。多谢！

To: xxxx Elementary School

Dear Mrs. xxx and Dr. xxx,

We are A's parents. This letter is to report that we found our daughter, A, was hurt by violence in the school. A said B pushed her down to the floor and kicked her on Monday, March 26, 2009. A lot of students saw the violence. A said she never do anything unfriendly to B. There are two pieces of skin hurts in A's right leg. We took the picture as evident. Please review the picture. Picture was taken on March 26, 2009.

We need a fair resolution for this violence. We require that B and her parents apologize for her violence and promise not to do it again. The school should prevent any further violence to my daughter or any other students.

We keep the right to take any further legal actions against this kind of school violence.

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• 这个，这个拿不出手吧 -caliber- ♂ 给 caliber 发送悄悄话 caliber 的博客首页 (71 bytes) () 03/26/2009 postreply 15:50:34

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• 回复：小孩子打架的事，不想搞得真象法律文书一样 -caliber- ♂ 给 caliber 发送悄悄话 caliber 的博客首页 (670 bytes) () 03/26/2009 postreply 16:12:38

• 多谢Caliber和老猫指点，看这样写行不行 -关键字- ♂ 给 关键字 发送悄悄话 关键字 的博客首页 (611 bytes) () 03/26/2009 postreply 16:44:39

• 回复：孩子在学校被欺负受伤，请大伙给看看这样写行不行 -單身老貓- ♂ 给 單身老貓 发送悄悄话 單身老貓 的博客首页 (219 bytes) () 03/26/2009 postreply 16:05:09

• 尊敬的老猫 -16818- ♀ 给 16818 发送悄悄话 (66 bytes) () 03/26/2009 postreply 16:21:25

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• 谢谢，根据你的建议又改了一句 -关键字- ♂ 给 关键字 发送悄悄话 关键字 的博客首页 (156 bytes) () 03/26/2009 postreply 17:01:33

• 这样的写法千万不要拿出去， 建议找个英文好的人帮忙些的专业一些 -355parkave- ♀ 给 355parkave 发送悄悄话 (0 bytes) () 03/26/2009 postreply 17:29:28

• as evident, 改成 as evidence. -wistara- ♀ 给 wistara 发送悄悄话 wistara 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 03/26/2009 postreply 19:35:04

• 多谢大家，明天就这么交吧 -关键字- ♂ 给 关键字 发送悄悄话 关键字 的博客首页 (644 bytes) () 03/26/2009 postreply 19:55:46

• 回复：多谢大家，明天就这么交吧 -單身老貓- ♂ 给 單身老貓 发送悄悄话 單身老貓 的博客首页 (943 bytes) () 03/26/2009 postreply 22:25:31

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• 谢谢猫兄。已经将这封短信交到学校了。 -关键字- ♂ 给 关键字 发送悄悄话 关键字 的博客首页 (24 bytes) () 03/27/2009 postreply 07:30:37

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