I would write like this

Dear Dr. xx

Thank you for taking the time to talk to me about xxx position. I appreciate your time and consideration in interviewing me for this position. I am convinced that I would be a perfect candidate for this position.

I have not received the call from HR of your company. I am looking forward to hearing from you for the further on-site interview.

In addition, I would be more than happy to give a 15-30 minutes presentation in on-site interview.

Thank you again.

Sincerely,

xxx

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• I would say, your writing is good, while the LZ's original -布衣之才- ♂ (12 bytes) () 08/18/2009 postreply 20:50:29

• really? -世界无童话- ♀ (0 bytes) () 08/18/2009 postreply 20:51:46

• 回复：I would write like this -xiao2009- ♀ (329 bytes) () 08/18/2009 postreply 20:58:52

• then, do not mention it -世界无童话- ♀ (0 bytes) () 08/18/2009 postreply 21:00:21

• if I were you, i would gave more example to convince him you are -世界无童话- ♀ (0 bytes) () 08/18/2009 postreply 21:01:51

• The original letter was just fine. This one is no better. -gqc- ♀ (0 bytes) () 08/20/2009 postreply 08:19:26