在望吟 Yuanxiao 2013

回睇遠山接天藍，爛帳流水人依然，燃燒折項幾層灰，輝煌翹首無多年，

念親記掛心未放，方遒揮斥激其間，揀拾喜有千古遺，一開新瓶仿酒泉。

Looking back at the far mountains of sky blue, bad day-to-day account and still I am drifting, remained layers of ash by burning in my youth but neck is broken , Hope eagerly for glory no many years ahead, my parent have not rest in sure, Boldly I cast all restraints aside in the stream, picking over gladly for missed by ancestors for thousands years, opened a new bottle imitating Jiuquan.

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• You should get a English tutor since you are writing so much. -ZoyaWashington- ♀ (0 bytes) () 02/22/2013 postreply 22:18:21

• My writing here is not free of grammar mistakes. And it is not practical for me to -走马读人- ♂ (94 bytes) () 02/23/2013 postreply 05:37:33

• 你贡献了别人所没有的那一部分， 好样的！ -小源- ♀ (0 bytes) () 02/23/2013 postreply 10:45:52

• 很有趣的翻译。 -加州花坊- ♀ (0 bytes) () 02/23/2013 postreply 06:58:54

• Interesting and painstaking -走马读人- ♂ (0 bytes) () 02/23/2013 postreply 07:51:20

• 欣赏！ -小源- ♀ (0 bytes) () 02/23/2013 postreply 08:23:58

• Tiny source, vast ocean！ -走马读人- ♂ (0 bytes) () 02/23/2013 postreply 08:33:13

• 能将古诗翻译成英文诗，佩服！谢谢分享。 -广陵晓阳- ♀ (0 bytes) () 02/24/2013 postreply 11:16:29

• Thx! It's my own 古體诗, not quite mature. -走马读人- ♂ (0 bytes) () 02/24/2013 postreply 11:36:55

• 中英文都这么好，那就佩服+佩服：）））。谢谢你的分享。 -广陵晓阳- ♀ (0 bytes) () 02/24/2013 postreply 11:50:49

• 俺仍在学习中 -成长- ♀ (0 bytes) () 02/24/2013 postreply 20:29:15

• 走马兄是这坛子里最深奥的 每次俺敲破脑袋也理解不到三分 ：（ -雨前茶- ♀ (0 bytes) () 02/25/2013 postreply 03:33:42