thank you! would you mind pointing those errors to me?

To my side, I definitely want to improve. 

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你中文就写的很差,不少地方读着很别扭,而且产生歧义,也有很多语法错误。 -tiantiantaba- 给 tiantiantaba 发送悄悄话 (118 bytes) () 09/06/2015 postreply 22:41:33

" 这个分数在单位就是人力资源部可以把我扫地出门的“ -丹皮- 给 丹皮 发送悄悄话 (187 bytes) () 09/06/2015 postreply 23:05:07

"To my side, I definitely want to improve." what do you mean her -LittleHer- 给 LittleHer 发送悄悄话 (70 bytes) () 09/07/2015 postreply 08:16:36

what do you mean here by "to my side"? -LittleHer- 给 LittleHer 发送悄悄话 (0 bytes) () 09/07/2015 postreply 08:26:15

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