看你的回复,我觉得能看出为什么你工作不被太认可。当然裁员很多时候和你没有关系真的是大环境。可是看你的文字已经会觉得你有不适合这个岗位的地方。比如那个leave as requested 本身就有抱怨的成分因为你老板的信里并没有叫你走只是说你可以走。 professional的话说leave就可以了。
你写的这个1.I have to emphasize that I only took 6 weeks vacation in advance which should exclude Christmas holiday.
Other time during my time in China I took no-pay leave. I believe it is same to every fulltime employee.
我的话会写成 In your email below, you mentioned the company would have to deduct the vacation I took in advance. Would you please help me understand how you get to this conclusion? As far as I understand, the policy allows me to take six weeks vacation in advance.
你的英语也有很多语法错误和用词的不准确。 这个点是我自己很敏感的点。我觉得太多同胞都觉得没关系写差一点没关系自己就这个水平。可是试想一个外国人来中国,6年了,写字还继续写错,最重要的是,只要上网自动更正一下都能找到的错误都还在犯,这个实在就是只能解释为对自己要求不高了。