尽管周会上说了N次关于怎样写卖人广告, 但当收到的要改的简历还是通病.
今早起来,看了两份,回复在此.可能对其他朋友有借鉴意义.
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R 大兄弟,
I read your resume.
Made some modification.
Please see attached file.
Please do following change:
1)Add an OBJECTIVE, tell people what are you looking for
2)Move Education to first page
3)Add a COMPUTER SKILL section
4) For work experience, please give Quantity, 要量化, How complex of the project is, how much budget, or $$ amount involved, etc. give detailed numbers.
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J 大妹子,
I read your resume.
Please do following change:
1)Add an OBJECTIVE, tell people what are you looking for
2)Move Education to first page
3)Replace TECHNICAL SKILLS section with COMPUTER SKILL section, move to first page.
List all the software name, version in this section. Get rid of the general terms.
4) For work experience, please give Quantity, 要量化, How complex of the project is, how large of the data, or $$ amount involved, etc. give detailed numbers.
