最近公司有个职位可以TRANSFER， 非常想去，DEADLINE 马上到了，我准备给那个DEPARTMENT MANAGER 发邮件，附上我的简历。以下是草稿，不知道这样写行不行， 恳请大家帮忙修改， 谢谢。
另外，除了这封邮件和RESUME，还需要发给他们什么呢？应该不需要COVER LETTER 了吧？还有什么要注意的事项呢？大家多多指导，我还是职场新手。Thanks a lot.
Dear [Name],
This is to officially express my intent to be transferred to xxx Department.
I have been worked in xxx Deparment since xx,x, xxxx. Over past months I have developed skills necessary for this job and served our company with all my energy to the best of my capabilities. I also become interested in the xxx area, which will give me more knowledge and development in xxx. Now I think its time to move on to acquire new skills, to increase my experience. Acquiring new skills will be beneficial for both the company and myself. So please consider my request in the meeting of HR.
Hoping for your reply.
Sincerely yours,
