这样拒绝已经接受的offer,委婉不?

Dear Johnny,
I appreciate you extend me the offer.
I am writing this email to let you that I just received another offer today which I can reject.
Therefore, I will not work for your company at this moment, I wish the chance will come in the future, so I will be happy to be your slave again.

Thanks for your understanding.

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• 好像错了一个关键词, 应为: ...which I can't reject. -visio2000- ♂ (0 bytes) () 09/28/2010 postreply 06:03:17

• Yes, 老土错了一个关键词, 应为: ...which I can't reject. 3Q! -美国老土- ♂ (46 bytes) () 09/28/2010 postreply 07:35:09

• 谢谢。参考了各位的意见和网上的信息，今早给HM电话讲了，很心虚地说。 -一儿一女一枝花- ♀ (164 bytes) () 09/28/2010 postreply 12:22:01