回复：请帮忙看看我写的这句英文有没有语病? 谢谢. 在线等....

"He noted that the major problem he had encountered at the workplace was that people tended to write in an overly technical manner regardless of their audience. This could have reduced the efficiency in communicating important information."

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• yeah, I had doubt about the 时态 too. thanks. -小谋- ♀ (0 bytes) () 02/14/2010 postreply 17:24:46

• 这种写法本身就很technical -龙少爷- ♂ (0 bytes) () 02/14/2010 postreply 19:25:49

• yes. the original tense was wrong. -gqc- ♀ (0 bytes) () 02/15/2010 postreply 06:46:53