最后一博. 不成就不要这OFFER了. 大侠们帮改一改吧.3Q!

Thank you for giving me the opportunity to work in my most familiar area –
design and develop automated precision equipments. I am sure I can be a
great addition to your company.

Upon serious inputs from professors, labmates, friends, and family members,
the only problem left right now appear to be: This job is not stable and it may
end up with either I can’t get the approval of H-1B visa or I will miss the chance
to secure other promising jobs before next February, since it is surely that my
full concentration will be on how to get the job done and there will be no time
spared to search and consider other job opportunities if I work in your company.

In view of that, it will rather benefit both parties if I can make my contributions
to your company as a permanent employee for at least one year, so that I can
have the chance to transfer H-1B visa to another company if you decide at that
time to downsize your company. Otherwise, I don’t mind to work as a contractor
worker but I need a punch card to record the time I will invest in your company.

Thanks for your kindly consideration,

Sincerely,

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With this letter in hand, I will turn you down in one second. -try2help- 给 try2help 发送悄悄话 (0 bytes) () 11/06/2007 postreply 08:13:35

Well, the matter is this company is not worth it -NewHandUpRoad- 给 NewHandUpRoad 发送悄悄话 NewHandUpRoad 的博客首页 (649 bytes) () 11/06/2007 postreply 08:25:29

Thank You. 这应该算是"贵人相助"吧. -MemberOne- 给 MemberOne 发送悄悄话 MemberOne 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 11/06/2007 postreply 08:30:03

Unfortunately, I'll have to agree with you here. -屋漏痕- 给 屋漏痕 发送悄悄话 屋漏痕 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 11/06/2007 postreply 08:29:30

It's game now, depending on the mindset of the Boss. -MemberOne- 给 MemberOne 发送悄悄话 MemberOne 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 11/06/2007 postreply 08:37:22

有理有据, 合情合理 -NewHandUpRoad- 给 NewHandUpRoad 发送悄悄话 NewHandUpRoad 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 11/06/2007 postreply 08:14:46

比俺当年写的好多了, 但是..... -美国老土- 给 美国老土 发送悄悄话 美国老土 的博客首页 (527 bytes) () 11/06/2007 postreply 08:22:46

EXACTLY. 你是我肚里的小虫么! 3Q, and (2Q+4Q)/2 -MemberOne- 给 MemberOne 发送悄悄话 MemberOne 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 11/06/2007 postreply 08:25:53

当然是啊!菜根上的土没洗净,俺就跟着那土.... -美国老土- 给 美国老土 发送悄悄话 美国老土 的博客首页 (313 bytes) () 11/06/2007 postreply 08:35:42

I applied for it through Monster. It didn't specify that the -MemberOne- 给 MemberOne 发送悄悄话 MemberOne 的博客首页 (314 bytes) () 11/06/2007 postreply 08:44:31

See if this makes sense… -屋漏痕- 给 屋漏痕 发送悄悄话 屋漏痕 的博客首页 (569 bytes) () 11/06/2007 postreply 09:49:35

From 205 words to 91 words! It's concise now. But is it a little -MemberOne- 给 MemberOne 发送悄悄话 MemberOne 的博客首页 (307 bytes) () 11/06/2007 postreply 10:23:45

If you don’t like the position, just say no to them. -屋漏痕- 给 屋漏痕 发送悄悄话 屋漏痕 的博客首页 (54 bytes) () 11/06/2007 postreply 10:53:48

Thanks! I'll send this to the boss and wait for his call. -MemberOne- 给 MemberOne 发送悄悄话 MemberOne 的博客首页 (53 bytes) () 11/06/2007 postreply 11:05:55

导弹已经发射出去了! 就看会不会响了. -MemberOne- 给 MemberOne 发送悄悄话 MemberOne 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 11/06/2007 postreply 11:17:41

我不去了.跟老板通了话.他说if我有好的OFFER他不拦我. -MemberOne- 给 MemberOne 发送悄悄话 MemberOne 的博客首页 (159 bytes) () 11/06/2007 postreply 18:44:29

I just period this deal with a letter. -MemberOne- 给 MemberOne 发送悄悄话 MemberOne 的博客首页 (512 bytes) () 11/06/2007 postreply 20:42:00

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