"obedient" is not a very good word

Use collaborative or similar. Obedient can be even negative sometimes. I think the sentence you used in your resume is too long. Is this the objective part of your resume? If it is, use something like

"A hardworking person with XXXXXXXX background is looking for a full-time (or the job title you are applying for) position at COMPANY NAME where extensive engineering experience in R&D and product improvement, great interpersonal skills and team work ability can be retained and developed"

What you have said in the sentence you have are all 空话. Anybody can say that on resume, the important part is how to show you have all that. You shouldn't just list all these thing in your resume, instead, you should express by showing these characteristics in previous experiences, which could be both from work and school.

For example, if this is what you want to show in your resume:

collaborative
hardworking
detail-oriented
strong problem-solving skill

instead of just claiming those things, say these things without mentioning just the words:

1. collaborative/team working
Work with (or manage) a team of X people to improve the product performance, reporting to manager for project status and ensure projects are completed on time.

2. hardworking
Responsible for doing XXXX using YYYY, working overtime if necessary to meet the client/project deadline.

3. detail-oriented
Create and execute test plans for XXXX; verify the results and correct the errors and defects.

4. strong problem-solving skill
Identify, research, diagnose, and resolve issues by analyze XXXX, correct YYYY and fix ZZZZZ.

The HR don't want you to tell them what you know, but they want you to show them what you know.

Your resume should take following structure:

Objective,
Experiences,
Skills,
Eduction,


Hopefully this will help a little bit.

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• Thanks! It is helpful, since it drives me to approach a -MemberOne- ♂ (209 bytes) () 11/05/2007 postreply 13:37:10