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Thank you for giving me the opportunity to work in my most familiar area – design and develop automated precision equipments. I will be a great addition to your company.

After having serious discussions with my family members, professors, and friends, we have concluded that the nature of this position may prevent me from gaining legal work status. I think both the company and I will be beneficial if I can work as a permanent employee. Otherwise, I would like to contribute as an hourly contractor. Thank you for your consideration.

Sincerely,

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• From 205 words to 91 words! It's concise now. But is it a little -MemberOne- ♂ (307 bytes) () 11/06/2007 postreply 10:23:45

• If you don’t like the position, just say no to them. -屋漏痕- ♂ (54 bytes) () 11/06/2007 postreply 10:53:48

• Thanks! I'll send this to the boss and wait for his call. -MemberOne- ♂ (53 bytes) () 11/06/2007 postreply 11:05:55