how to modify my Cover letter?

Dear Sir or Madam,
I got my Pharmacy Doctor degree in Peking Union Medical College last year and now I am a Postdoctor and conduct research on synthesis of marine natural products in Paderborn University, Germany. During my academic year, I received rigorous and vigorous training in advanced organic, medicinal and natural products chemistry and obtained various techniques of organic synthesis and chromatography, and published 15 research papers, and gotten a patent. In particular, my current research works make me go deep into the field of the challenged total synthesis of natural products. Thus I have built my strong research background, this will help me pursue my future research career, and what’s more, actual research bequeathed me expertise in a variety of research methods and endowed me with a strong ability to conduct independent research.
With the deepening of my research, I strongly feel the need to further refine my expertise in my chosen field and to make myself more insightful in broader theoretical and practical framework.
I strongly hope to join your company, If you kindly provide me with a further training opportunity, I am convinced that I can make my contribution to your company by virtue of my research experience, knowledge and techniques. At the same time, I believe I could learn more knowledge from you, this also is important for me to firmly stand on the cutting edge of the rapid development in my research field in the future.
Thank you for kind consideration. Please let me know if you have a position and are you interested in letting me work with you. I would appreciate it very much if you could introduce me to someone else who is looking for a young researcher like me and might be in accepting me as a fellow.
Thank you and with kind regards, I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.

Very sincerely yours

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• Peking Union Medical College? -北京联合大学？- ♀ (19 bytes) () 11/03/2003 postreply 06:18:00

• 您老又是哪种学校的？ -北京联大！- ♀ (0 bytes) () 11/03/2003 postreply 07:01:00

• 中国协和医科大学. -#1MedicalU- ♀ (0 bytes) () 11/03/2003 postreply 09:00:00

• 是个好学校。可你用不着跟吃了壮阳药似的， -拿学校名壮事，壮一- ♀ (32 bytes) () 11/03/2003 postreply 16:06:00

• 回复：how to modify my Cover letter? -Itmanager- ♀ (2639 bytes) () 11/03/2003 postreply 12:51:00

• 回复：回复：how to modify my Cover l -hjh73- ♀ (150 bytes) () 11/04/2003 postreply 05:49:00

• 语法上有错误,用的一些词太生僻,总之不地道,找个美国人改一下 -现在不太好- ♀ (0 bytes) () 11/03/2003 postreply 13:29:00

• 协和没有药学院， 又要开骗是不是？ -MDPHD232- ♀ (107 bytes) () 11/03/2003 postreply 15:21:00

• 挺肉麻的,呵.. -winds30- ♀ (0 bytes) () 11/03/2003 postreply 15:54:00

• 是药物所的吧,, -silentsand- ♀ (26 bytes) () 11/03/2003 postreply 16:11:00

• 回复：是药物所的吧,, -hjh73- ♀ (2 bytes) () 11/04/2003 postreply 05:41:00