翻译一首诗玩--雪夜驻足小林

雪夜驻足小林 （译飞花落梦）

 

我猜得出谁是这树林的主人

他应是住在一个小村

料想不到会有人就此驻足

看他的树林雪花儿遍布

我的马儿一定好奇

为何没靠近农舍却留步

在这树林和冰封的湖边

和一年里最幽暗的这个夜晚

他摇一摇缰绳上的铃铛

想知道出了什么状况

却唯有雪花飘落，微风低吟

多留恋这深邃可爱，夜中的树林

可是我还有繁务缠身

还要走多少里路啊，才可睡得安稳

还要走多少里路啊，才可睡得安稳

 

Stopping by Woods on a Snowy Evening (1923)
－－Robert Frost

Whose woods these are I think I know.
His house is in the village though;
He will not see me stopping here
To watch his woods fill up with snow.

My little horse must think it queer
To stop without a farmhouse near
Between the woods and frozen lake
The darkest evening of the year.

He gives his harness bells a shake
To ask if there is some mistake.
The only other sound’s the sweep
Of easy wind and downy flake.

The woods are lovely, dark, and deep,
But I have promises to keep,
And miles to go before I sleep,
And miles to go before I sleep.

 

 

所有跟帖： 

• 原诗是一首英文七言。每句七个音节。 -贾平凸- ♂ (0 bytes) () 10/15/2015 postreply 04:36:16

• 凸哥早上好 -舞女- ♂ (0 bytes) () 10/15/2015 postreply 05:02:52

• 才子才子 -CRUSH- ♂ (0 bytes) () 10/15/2015 postreply 06:52:51

• 还真么注意到啊，翻译歪了。。 -飞花落梦- ♀ (0 bytes) () 10/15/2015 postreply 12:17:31

• 才女才女 -CRUSH- ♂ (6941 bytes) () 10/15/2015 postreply 06:51:42

• 你就是传说中爱干好事的雷锋吧？ -才迷- ♂ (0 bytes) () 10/15/2015 postreply 09:48:21

• 俺干啥好事了，有奖励没 -CRUSH- ♂ (0 bytes) () 10/15/2015 postreply 10:29:31

• 才子才子！：） -飞花落梦- ♀ (0 bytes) () 10/15/2015 postreply 12:19:43

• 好 -七零- ♂ (3 bytes) () 10/15/2015 postreply 08:04:50

• :) -飞花落梦- ♀ (0 bytes) () 10/15/2015 postreply 12:43:03

• 诗人们是不是都喜欢去小树林散步找灵感呀 -才迷- ♂ (68 bytes) () 10/15/2015 postreply 09:34:58

• 才哥，我听说诗人都在丛林中日出的时候灵感特好！ -思念青荷- ♀ (0 bytes) () 10/15/2015 postreply 10:30:15

• mark！mark！mark！ -才迷- ♂ (22 bytes) () 10/15/2015 postreply 10:42:00

• 出是谁啊。。 -舞女- ♂ (0 bytes) () 10/15/2015 postreply 11:39:48

• 也读读看 -飞花落梦- ♀ (0 bytes) () 10/15/2015 postreply 12:18:34