秀秀宝贝女儿的作文

明天女儿该交作业了。于是赶紧催她去写作文。没想到，20多分钟，女儿就把写好的作文拿给我看。我一看，写得好棒！忍不住贴上来请大家欣赏。女儿听了特得意，说She is going to be famous! 还嘱咐我要说明她只有六岁.

The Pot of Gold
It was raining one day and I sat in the house watching the rain pitter-patter against my window. Then, finally the rain stopped. I went outside and saw a beautiful rainbow! I was wondering what would be at the end of the rainbow. Could it be diamonds? Or the cutest squirrel in the world? Or a pot of GOLD!? I really wanted to see! So I packed some lunch, and set off to the end of the rainbow. It was already noon! But I didn’t stop. Then, I found a place where I can eat my lunch. So, I sat down and ate. When I was done, I started walking again. Then finally finally FINALLY I came to the end of the rainbow!! There, I found a pot of gold. The pot was filled with gold. There was even gold on the ground! I picked up a lot of gold and took it home. I never ever used the gold in my life! You know why? I wanted to save it for my children. That was a cool adventure!

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• 嗯，真的很棒，是作家的料 -听听意见- ♀ (0 bytes) () 03/19/2009 postreply 20:49:19

• 真不错，6岁能写得这么生动，有内容。 -虎崽羊妞- ♀ (0 bytes) () 03/19/2009 postreply 20:52:23

• 多谢支持！ -MomKelly- ♀ (0 bytes) () 03/19/2009 postreply 22:19:09

• 回复：秀秀宝贝女儿的作文 -princessonthepea- ♀ (168 bytes) () 03/19/2009 postreply 22:41:08

• Good point! Didn't think that way. -MomKelly- ♀ (36 bytes) () 03/19/2009 postreply 22:49:03

• wow,好美的文章，才6岁？你有个善解人意的好女儿， -四口之家- ♀ (30 bytes) () 03/20/2009 postreply 00:20:41

• her imagination is amazing like a poet! -hz82000- ♀ (0 bytes) () 03/20/2009 postreply 04:07:03

• She is going to be famous! -01312009- ♀ (0 bytes) () 03/20/2009 postreply 05:46:47