想不到,人过中年,母亲节在家辅导娃写中学作文,我说中文思路,娃写成英文。学校的作文,老师给了美国大萧条时期,加州移民工人的凄惨挨饿的境遇,有一个女记者拍了饥饿母亲和孩子的照片,得到了联邦政府的援助,老师要他们挑出课文里的人物,用人物的口气,写关于爱和同情心之类的议论文。我看儿子写的屁也不是,内容空空,赶紧帮他,你比喻也没有,意象也没有,义正言辞的分析也没有,思想COMPLEXITY也没有。你怎么让老师给分?刚陪娃考完AP物理,我又化身变成语文老师,给娃上作文课,写议论文。手把手教他怎样引材料,发议论,拔思想高度。娃写完,我发愁,没有我帮你,你自己写怎么办?娃说他用AI写。我想一想也不错啊。以后官样文章,谁还用手写?只要知道什么是好的英文就可以了,让机器写。
看了美国大萧条时代的农场工人记录,似乎比中国老百姓也好不到哪里去,不过二战之后美国还是走上了上升的国运。
美国学校的老师也挺扯淡,发的一篇范文,是100年多年前,美国南方贫困的黑人农村,整个农村都是破烂棚房,黑奶奶的花被黑小孩故意踩坏了,因为黑小孩的父母没有工作,她听见她父亲半夜哭诉,几年没有工作收入。那个孩子突然很愤怒,把社区里唯一的花地给踩碎了。这是对自家贫穷和黑人处于社会底层的愤恨。也是要结合主人公口气,写爱和同情。老师的范文让我笑不动了,老师以黑奶奶的口气写爱和同情,黑奶奶变成中产阶级的白女,说社区不应该破破烂烂,要教孩子尊重社区的美丽和他人劳动成果。我跟孩子说笑,黑奶奶连完整的英文也说不出来,只会朝黑孩子挥手杖,说几个南方黑人俚语词。这老师的范文,就像鲁迅笔下的祥林嫂,孩子被狼吃掉了,她发言要关注儿童安全,呼吁社区集体防狼。这不着原著的调。我把老师的范文贴给CHATGPT,AI说老师的范文很好,RUBIC里面,该有的观点和论据都有。我把上面的话再贴给AI,AI承认这个问题,不过还是嘴犟,欺负我不懂美国的学校标准,说打分模板就是这样的,这样就能得高分。我靠
贴娃的学校作文。
Mrs. Michels
English 1, Part 1 College Prep
1 May 2026
The Photograph That Pulled a Mother and Her Children Back from Despair
By: Dorothea Lange, “ Endangered Dreams”
It was difficult to imagine that the photograph I happened to take in March 1936, while driving past a pea pickers’ camp near Nipomo,California - later known as Migrant Mother - would become the most influential image of my career. The photograph was not only viewed by approximately 270,000 newspaper readers, but also prompted the federal government to take action. In response to the public attention it generated, twenty thousand pounds of food were rushed to rescue the starving pea pickers.
I must confess that, after initially passing the pea pickers’ camp, I spent the next twenty miles debating the merits of turning back. My experience as a journalist had taught me that the lives of migrant workers - people who could scarcely speak for themselves and were struggling merely to survive - were too often treated as invisible and undervalued. I doubted that my photographs would be welcomed by newspapers or attract serious public attention. At the time, all my fieldwork felt futile. We were living in a society that paid far greater attention to wealth and power than to poverty and the suffering of the poor.
However, in a sudden instinctive decision, I made a U-turn on the empty highway and returned to the pea pickers’ camp. As I later recalled,“I saw and approached the hungry and desperate mother, as if drawn by a magnet.” (Lange, Endangered Dreams) “I made five exposures, working closer and closer. I did not ask her name or her history. She said they had been living in frozen vegetables from the surrounding fields and birds that the children had killed. She had just sold the tires from her car to buy food. There she sat in the lean-to tent with her children huddled around her. There was a sort of equality about it.” I felt at that moment.(Lange, Endangered Dreams)
This single encounter taught me the true meaning of empathy. Empathy is not just feeling sorry for someone; it is the willingness to see another’s suffering as if it were one’s own and to act on it. Standing in that muddy camp, surrounded by desperate families, I came to realize that no individual can truly possess dignity unless they devote themselves to the welfare of their fellow human beings. In this sense, “there was a sort of equality about it.” (Endangered Dreams)
A good person cannot remain indifferent while others struggle with hunger and suffering. If someone feels nothing when others suffer, that person lacks both a sense of human equality and genuine compassion.
Compassion, in my view, is one of the noblest qualities human beings can possess. I am opposed to the system of society in which we live, not because society lacks sufficient resources for migrant workers and their children, but because I cannot make myself comfortable knowing that thousands upon thousands of my fellow human beings suffer for the barest necessities of life, many of whom are women and children.
When poverty invades a family, children are invariably the first victims to bear its brunt - the most vulnerable members whose suffering reveals the true human cost of societal neglect. In the camps I visited, the heartbreaking scenes unfolded exactly as other reporters described. “One three-year-old child , his belly swollen from malnutrition, sat on the ground in front of the house while little black flies buzzed in circles and landed on his closed eyes until he weakly brushed them away. ” He had not had any milk for a long time. “He would die in a very short time.” (The Harvest Gypsies)
Women in the camps fared no better. Conditions aligned closely with reports from fellow observers: “Four nights ago a mother had a baby in the tent, on the dirty carpet. It was born dead, which was just as well because she could not have fed it at the breast; her own diet would not produce milk.” (The Harvest Gypsies) This harrowing scene lays bare the brutal reality of maternal suffering - the mother’s physical exhaustion and quiet despair. Such accounts force me not only to witness the pain, but to feel it through empathy, imagining myself in that desperate mother’s place.
These descriptions reveal a profound truth: Mother Nature has generously spread a great table for all her children. There is a place for everyone, and there are plates and food for all. Yet any society that denies even one person the right and opportunity to share in Mother Nature’s provisions is a deeply unjust society that cannot truly call itself civilized.
People were often misled by the outdated ethic that a man’s business upon this earth was merely to look out for himself. That was the ethic of the jungle, the ethic of wild beasts: take care of myself, no matter what may become of my fellow man. In a civilized society, however, I bear a moral obligation to others. How could I judge myself if I were capable of seating myself at a table, indulging myself in food, while around me the children of my fellow human beings were starving to death?
Some people fall into hardship because of natural disasters, misfortune, accidents, or illness - yet this does not mean that they deserve to suffer.Such experiences were vividly echoed by other reporters. One journalist described how “the father of this family once had a little grocery store. When the drought set in there was no trade for the store anymore. This is the middle class of the squatters’ camp. In a few months this family will slip down to the lower class. Dignity is all gone.”(The Harvest Gypsies) It reminds us that today’s middle class can become tomorrow’s penniless, highlighting the fragility of social position. Indifference toward such people is especially dangerous: should we one day face the same unfortunate fate, we too may be neglected and disregarded by society. A society built upon such indifference possesses neither dignity nor any true victors.
Indeed, humans living in poverty can possess neither material security nor human dignity. Poverty, like a disease, not only harms the physical body, but also strips away the human spirit and may even pass its suffering from parents to their innocent children. Sometimes this humiliation remains silent and unseen. During my fieldwork, I observed children wearing ragged clothes who would not go to school, exactly as other reporters had documented “they hide in ditches or wander off by themselves until it is time to go back to the tent, because they are scorned in the school” and “ the better-dressed children shout and jeer. The parents of the ‘nice’ children do not want to have disease carriers in the schools.” (The Harvest Gypsies) The children’s shame and isolation demonstrate the damage of poverty extends far beyond hunger,making genuine empathy even more essential. In my view, diseases caused by the lack of sanitation may perhaps be cured, but human indifference is a far more terrifying disease, one that is much more difficult to heal.
Seeing the thousands upon thousands of starving victims, one might conclude that an individual's effort is utterly insignificant. Yet my single photograph powerfully demonstrates the opposite: one image, born of empathy and compassion, can ignite a nation’s social conscience and drive meaningful social change. As a result, it was precisely this rescue effort - the rapid delivery of twenty thousand pounds of food- that reinforced my belief in the collective power of human compassion, the combined force of countless individuals across a nation suffering through the Great Depression.
Social conscience has the power to turn an entire society away from its seemingly inevitable decline. Just as I made a U-turn on that empty California highway in 1936 to document the migrant mother’s suffering, our nation, through united empathy and moral courage, can still make a profound U-turn - away from indifference and toward a brighter, more just future.