初中升高中，有枣没枣打一杆子。
命题作文“你觉得为什么本校是一个good match，你的孩子会怎样align with the curriculum?"
领导写的，我觉得一篇作文四平八稳，全部是废话，孩子的面容仍旧模糊，没有利用好展示孩子天赋的机会
想请教一下，应该写得这么官方吗？还是多写一点具体细节？限900个字符，现在已有780。我觉得最后三句话都是废话，等于什么也没说。
AAA is kind, happy and exceptionally bright, especially in math, science and computer coding. As parents, we always want AAA be able to thrive in a learning environment that values diversity, encourages creativity, and builds independent thinking and collaboration. For that, we chose to move to ZZZ School District 8 years ago. For that same reason, we are now encouraging him to apply for XXX school. We believe that AAA will benefit tremendously from XXX's top notch academic curriculum, diverse student body and world class teaching faculty. At the same time, with his unique background and experience, AAA will become a valuable member by bringing in his own perspectives and contributions to the school community.
多谢意见！
