我喜欢第一篇

特别是这段：“No, to your right. From his position, what direction does he see you?” From his angle, I was to his left. In that moment, I realized that perspective and precision of language is everything. The radio chirped: “Cessna One-Eight-Two Sandra, heading north to John Wayne Airport. Over.”

所有跟帖： 

• 前面还不错开飞机吸引人，但接下来有点平铺直叙, 堆砌了做过的事，感觉自述过多虎头蛇尾。读者预期是特立独行离经叛道的品格 -米汤- ♂ (0 bytes) () 05/06/2022 postreply 10:11:18

• 文章写了自己的growth，但没有对community的impact，因为这是个priviledge的community -windyLL- ♀ (216 bytes) () 05/06/2022 postreply 10:18:03

• 这位AO评出了要点 -米汤- ♂ (0 bytes) () 05/06/2022 postreply 10:19:50

• 哈哈，显然真AO不这么想，也说明了Essay不是rate-limiting step。 -windyLL- ♀ (0 bytes) () 05/06/2022 postreply 10:22:54