与YUN212女士的女儿同样的写作题目,小女的写作风格则完全不同…

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xxx。Tell us about your engagement with a topic or idea that excites you. Why are you drawn to it? (250 words or fewer)

A tower teeters on my bedside table, a cacophony of colorful spines thick and thin. They are all presents from my father, ranging from Steven King Novels, to highly inaccurate Greek mythology, to a knot-tying manual that I‘m proud to say I’ve read cover to cover. Yet there is only one book I’ve read three times. It opens: Would you like to know how the universe began? And then: We have no idea.

From those four words, I was hooked. In the course of a week, one page turned into two, then twenty, then a hundred. Enrapt, I devoured each chapter, my mind an insatiable itch. I laughed at the jokes in the footnotes, pondered over philosophical questions, puzzled over general relativity. Soon enough I had reached the back cover, my mind a whir of information. Concepts of space-time, dark matter, string theory. Oxymorons like “evaporating black holes” and “repulsive gravity.” As I learned more and more about how the universe worked, and how much remained a mystery, my eyes opened to an infinitely larger worldview than I’d known before, one of stars that race away from us and tiny particles that pass through our molecules every second. In our vast and unknowable universe, I’ve never felt so small. Yet it is small in the best way possible, because it means that there is a banquet of knowledge to discover.

 I record the questions and contradictions in my heart, and dream of learning the answers.

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我喜欢这篇。 -Rockeymountain- 给 Rockeymountain 发送悄悄话 Rockeymountain 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 03/13/2022 postreply 08:27:50

非常优秀的高中毕业生,水平超过大多数顾问 -大地长空- 给 大地长空 发送悄悄话 (0 bytes) () 03/13/2022 postreply 08:38:34

这也写得挺好,理科生 -tibuko- 给 tibuko 发送悄悄话 tibuko 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 03/13/2022 postreply 08:59:00

看了这篇感觉是有人在弹钢琴bubble bee。完全是炫技 -米汤- 给 米汤 发送悄悄话 米汤 的博客首页 (100 bytes) () 03/13/2022 postreply 09:04:11

这篇没有炫技啊,很质朴 -tibuko- 给 tibuko 发送悄悄话 tibuko 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 03/13/2022 postreply 09:09:00

感觉主题很简单,但联系了这么多东西:父亲,文学,古典,物理,生物,阅读,追求,热忱.. -米汤- 给 米汤 发送悄悄话 米汤 的博客首页 (104 bytes) () 03/13/2022 postreply 09:16:20

Excellent narrative but not necessarily a winning choice -贾平凸- 给 贾平凸 发送悄悄话 贾平凸 的博客首页 (134 bytes) () 03/13/2022 postreply 09:20:41

请问最后这学校录取了吗? -家有两兔- 给 家有两兔 发送悄悄话 (0 bytes) () 03/13/2022 postreply 09:51:44

不晓得。这是从我手机上她的部分Gmail信息上Copy下来的。 -Katrina2005- 给 Katrina2005 发送悄悄话 (82 bytes) () 03/13/2022 postreply 10:02:16

这篇读起来应该是很典型的学习好乖孩子女娃的风格。中规中矩,但是深度不够。当然孩子阅历年龄在那里。 -gossipgirl8- 给 gossipgirl8 发送悄悄话 gossipgirl8 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 03/13/2022 postreply 10:36:35

挺好的,文笔流畅! -solarwind00- 给 solarwind00 发送悄悄话 (0 bytes) () 03/13/2022 postreply 10:48:00

这是Y essay吧。录了没有家长会不知道?! -ilovepiano- 给 ilovepiano 发送悄悄话 (0 bytes) () 03/13/2022 postreply 11:06:47

很吸引人。请问是啥书? -AlexisMom- 给 AlexisMom 发送悄悄话 AlexisMom 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 03/13/2022 postreply 18:28:57

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