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来源: 数与形 2019-12-06 20:11:27 [] [旧帖] [给我悄悄话] 本文已被阅读: 次 (38447 bytes)
Hey everyone, I hope this helps, and I wish you the best of luck in your applications!

Decision: Accepted


Objective

SAT I (breakdown): Didn't Submit
ACT (breakdown): C36, E36, M36, R36, S36. Writing: 10/10/10
SAT II: Chem: 800, Phys: 800, Math II: 800
Unweighted GPA (out of 4.0): 4.0
Weighted GPA: 4.55 (Stanford didn't see this)
Rank (percentile if rank is unavailable): No rank available, Top 1%
AP (place score in parenthesis):
9th:
AP Calculus AB (5)
AP Physics C: Electricity & Magnetism

10th:
AP World History (4)
AP Chemistry (5)
AP Computer Science A (5)

11th:
AP Spanish Language (4)
AP Calculus BC (5) - AB Subscore (5)
AP Physics C: Mechanics (5)
AP US History (5)
AP Psychology (5)
AP English Language & Composition (5)

12th (in progress):
AP Microeconomics
AP Literature & Composition
AP Environmental Science
AP Government & Politics

IB (place score in parenthesis): N/A
Senior Year Course Load:
Jazz Ensemble (Advanced)
Wind Ensemble (Advanced)
AP Environmental Science (AP)
AP Microeconomics (AP, 1st sem)
Aerospace Engineering (Regular, 2nd sem)
AP Literature & Comp (AP)
AP Government & Politics (AP)
Racquet & Net Sports (regular, 1st sem)
Walking & Yoga (regular, 2nd sem)
AP Music Theory (AP)

Major Awards (As submitted in my Application, followed by level and grade):
1 of 11 students who represented USA @ intl Math Kangaroo Camp/Comp. 3rd place in both competitions. (Natl,Intl, 9)
United States Earth Science Olympiad: selected as alternate to the international team (Top 12 ntl). (Natl, 11)
Regional Champions, Tied for 7th place team at National Science Bowl, Top 40
individuals nationwide. (State/Rgnl, Ntl, 10)
Qualified to take the United States of America Junior Mathematics Olympiad (~Top 150 ntl). (Ntl, 10)
2019 National Merit Scholarship Semifinalist (ntl, 12).

Other awards mentioned in activities:
USA Astrophysics & Astronomy Olympiad NAO qualifier (top 50 US)
Captain of Washington State ARML Team (10-12) and member of Washington HMMT & PUMaC teams (10-11)
Part of choir, Top 3 at international festival in certain categories, Top 3 in NATS
Science Olympiad: 4 top 5 places at WA state.

Subjective

Extracurriculars (place leadership in parenthesis):

Job/Work Experience:
Private Tutoring & Kumon math teaching job (fairly self-explanatory)
Internship at UW optics lab (9)
Volunteer/Community service:
Prez/founder of Science Infinity 501(c)(3) org. (Dedicated to promoting STEM in youth. Donated $10k+ to education for underprivileged youth, started new chapter in Kansas City. Indiv Gold PVSA award)
Environmental Strikes, Volunteering, education, etc.
Summer Activities:
Participant at Stanford University Mathematics Camp (40 students internationally selected)
United States Earth Science Olympiad Summer camp (see awards)
International Math Camp (See awards)

School Clubs:
Science Bowl (VP, 10-12)
Science Olympiad (CoPrez, 12)
Math Club (Prez, 12)
Physics Club (CoPrez, 12)
Green Team (Environmental Club)

Other:
Research Project/Simulation on factors of a NetZero home, designed to educate and promote implementation of renewable energy and reduction of energy consumption in homes. Some awards to accompany the project (sustainable award at state Science Fair, winner of other smaller State competition)


Essays (rating 1-10, details):
Common App: 8/10. Pretty proud of this one. Depicted my experience at the Earth Science Olympiad, my growth as a person there - in terms of teamwork and my newfound desire to be a Climate activist and do research to help mitigate climate change.
Activity essay: 5/10. Talked about Science Infinity (nonprofit, see ecs) and my passion for teaching/helping others and its accomplishments. Not super proud of the way it was written, don't feel I expressed my passion fully.
Most Significant Challenge: 7.5/10. Feel like I used the 50 words in the fullest to express my concern for the changing climate.
Last 2 Summers: 7/10. I liked this, I covered the academic side of my summers by mentioning my summer camps, but focused on my favorite non-academic memory from each camp.
Historical Moment or event: 6/10. Talked about being a part of the control room of the Apollo 11 mission.
What 5 words best describe you. Took a risk here, not sure if they would've received it positively or not:
engagEd
compAssionate
eneRgetic
sponTaneous
insigHtful
Read, Listen, Watch: 5/10. Nothing special, talked about my interests like frisbee, a capella mashups, favorite shows, Earth Science and bollywood movies.
Looking forward to: 6/10. Talked about my hobby for Ultimate frisbee and interest in pursuing it.
Extra Hour: Meditation, inspired by my visit to Windhover while at Stanford.
Excited about learning: 8/10. Talked about the curiosity I feel when I learn something completely novel, used a specific example of a problem at Stanford Math Camp
Future Roommate: 7/10. Kinda stylistically different from my other essays, described my interests and how I imagined our time together would go.
Meaningful: 6/10. Why the Earth is meaningful to me. Not sure I expressed my passion as fully as I could've.

Recommendations (rating 1-10, details):

Teacher Rec #1: 8-9. English teacher, believe he had a high opinion of me. He wrote a rec for Stanford Math Camp, and he is a very good writer.
Teacher Rec #2: 7-8. Physics teacher. helped him a lot in class, believe he also has a high opinion of me.
Counselor Rec: 5-6. Counselor definitely has a good opinion of me, but haven't spent time with her or connected with her in a way I have with my teachers. That being said, I did provide a lot of personal details with ehr as part of my request for a recommendation.
Additional Rec: 9-10. Leader of United States Earth Science Olympiad. Believe he had a high opinion of me, and greatly appreciated me and my help at the camp. Would have definitely written a strong recommendation, IMO.
Interview: 6-7. Covered a lot about me, but no real conversation. Felt like an actual interview, not a conversation, as I've heard much of the interviews have been like.

Other

Applied for Financial Aid?: No
Intended Major: Indicated CS and Earth Sciences.
State (if domestic applicant): Washington
Country (if international applicant): USA
School Type: Public
Ethnicity: South Asian/Indian
Gender: Male
Income Bracket:
Hooks (URM, first generation college, etc.): none

Reflection

Strengths: Overall I think I am a well-rounded applicant. Stanford is my dream school and I think that showed. While no real legacy, many past United States Earth Science Olympiad students have gone to Stanford, and Stanford University mathematics Camp may have been looked upon favorably.
Weaknesses: My essays were definitely a weakness. Besides the common app essay, they were likely around average, even if they are good for my writing abilities.
Why you think you were accepted/waitlisted/rejected: I think a good portion of my acceptance rested on my achievements and recommendations, and my common app essay. My supplementals had some good ideas in my opinion but the message/writing/passion may not have come across as strongly.
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对这几个牛校,有实力后,最后拼的是运气。。。 -Midwestrural- 给 Midwestrural 发送悄悄话 (0 bytes) () 12/06/2019 postreply 20:19:34

Participant at Stanford University Mathematics Camp ,介个 -羊爸- 给 羊爸 发送悄悄话 (0 bytes) () 12/06/2019 postreply 20:19:39

bingo! -数与形- 给 数与形 发送悄悄话 (0 bytes) () 12/06/2019 postreply 20:21:52

No -Michelangelo- 给 Michelangelo 发送悄悄话 Michelangelo 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 12/06/2019 postreply 20:28:42

为啥No? 有那个camp出来但被S拒的? -数与形- 给 数与形 发送悄悄话 (0 bytes) () 12/06/2019 postreply 20:31:19

知道好几个进了那个camp 但没进S -acreek- 给 acreek 发送悄悄话 (0 bytes) () 12/06/2019 postreply 20:33:47

是这两年的事吗?前几年传说保进的。 -数与形- 给 数与形 发送悄悄话 (0 bytes) () 12/06/2019 postreply 20:34:41

知道两个是近两年的,还有一个是三、四年前的 -acreek- 给 acreek 发送悄悄话 (0 bytes) () 12/06/2019 postreply 21:07:27

咋搞的?录取率率创新低,却没以前那么有保证了 -数与形- 给 数与形 发送悄悄话 (0 bytes) () 12/06/2019 postreply 21:15:07

运气好。当然其他都在线 -greenoasis- 给 greenoasis 发送悄悄话 (0 bytes) () 12/06/2019 postreply 20:25:31

ACT writing 10/10/10是什么意思? -iMe- 给 iMe 发送悄悄话 (31 bytes) () 12/06/2019 postreply 20:31:46

typo吧,不影响大局 -数与形- 给 数与形 发送悄悄话 (0 bytes) () 12/06/2019 postreply 20:32:55

牛孩一枚,进是应该,不进就是和二娃一样让人无语 -cowhorse- 给 cowhorse 发送悄悄话 cowhorse 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 12/06/2019 postreply 20:43:03

这娃录取基本还是有迹可循的 -beachlver- 给 beachlver 发送悄悄话 beachlver 的博客首页 (323 bytes) () 12/06/2019 postreply 21:20:42

focused吗?同时搞好多活动啊 -数与形- 给 数与形 发送悄悄话 (0 bytes) () 12/06/2019 postreply 21:51:06

这些二娃都有 -greenoasis- 给 greenoasis 发送悄悄话 (0 bytes) () 12/07/2019 postreply 05:40:11

難道不是那earth science奧賽嗎? -violinpiano- 给 violinpiano 发送悄悄话 (328 bytes) () 12/06/2019 postreply 21:22:38

没听你们说过这个奥赛,我们这里也没有。是新的吗?竞争激烈吗? -数与形- 给 数与形 发送悄悄话 (0 bytes) () 12/06/2019 postreply 21:42:02

我也沒聼過 -violinpiano- 给 violinpiano 发送悄悄话 (190 bytes) () 12/06/2019 postreply 21:47:05

同感,有高手指点。天文奧賽和Kangaroo Camp我也都没听说过。 -数与形- 给 数与形 发送悄悄话 (0 bytes) () 12/06/2019 postreply 21:54:18

袋鼠是小學生玩的啊 誰高中還玩這個比賽啊 -violinpiano- 给 violinpiano 发送悄悄话 (217 bytes) () 12/06/2019 postreply 21:58:26

(Natl,Intl, 9), 九年级的意思? -数与形- 给 数与形 发送悄悄话 (0 bytes) () 12/06/2019 postreply 22:00:06

我的意思是袋鼠雖然1到12年級都能比 -violinpiano- 给 violinpiano 发送悄悄话 (337 bytes) () 12/06/2019 postreply 22:04:52

反正写出来好看,国际大奖啊 -数与形- 给 数与形 发送悄悄话 (0 bytes) () 12/06/2019 postreply 22:06:10

袋鼠确实有一直到12年级的比赛,不过含金量和难度和后面的AMC, AIME等都没法比,所以真正数学好的孩子都很早就不玩这个了 -beibei_2018- 给 beibei_2018 发送悄悄话 (0 bytes) () 12/06/2019 postreply 22:05:46

Donated $10k+ to education 。。。这个难道不是又是家长的游戏??? -beibei_2018- 给 beibei_2018 发送悄悄话 (0 bytes) () 12/06/2019 postreply 21:53:48

自己挣的?这也是个套路 -greenoasis- 给 greenoasis 发送悄悄话 (0 bytes) () 12/06/2019 postreply 22:04:22

看了一下他的网站,其实就是拉几个孩子volunteer 给小学生上上课,话说我们村最近有不少高中生这么干,都是给升学逼的 -beibei_2018- 给 beibei_2018 发送悄悄话 (0 bytes) () 12/06/2019 postreply 22:07:34

我们这里也是,我带老二去参加本村中小学生数学竞赛, -数与形- 给 数与形 发送悄悄话 (159 bytes) () 12/06/2019 postreply 22:12:08

就是这样。收费,就有钱了可以捐了。因为大学要看你义工有什么影响力。 -greenoasis- 给 greenoasis 发送悄悄话 (62 bytes) () 12/06/2019 postreply 22:15:23

收费就不能算volunteer经验了吧,我们这里高中生上课就象征性的收个$50, 一连好多个周末,每次1个半小时 -beibei_2018- 给 beibei_2018 发送悄悄话 (0 bytes) () 12/06/2019 postreply 22:18:06

说圆了就算啊。义工,收钱,直接捐。所以还是义工。 -greenoasis- 给 greenoasis 发送悄悄话 (0 bytes) () 12/06/2019 postreply 22:20:44

AP 2 个 4分还是 top 1%. 不是特别难读的高中。 -greenoasis- 给 greenoasis 发送悄悄话 (0 bytes) () 12/06/2019 postreply 21:59:53

感觉这娃没啥特别强的spike, 胜在全面开花 -beibei_2018- 给 beibei_2018 发送悄悄话 (0 bytes) () 12/06/2019 postreply 22:09:42

胜在本身够强,然后就像楼上双琴说的,知道游戏规则。从小规划好的。 -greenoasis- 给 greenoasis 发送悄悄话 (0 bytes) () 12/06/2019 postreply 22:13:30

兴趣也比较偏, Earth Sciences。 -数与形- 给 数与形 发送悄悄话 (0 bytes) () 12/06/2019 postreply 22:15:49

也是这种感觉。喜欢Earth Science是亮点。 -joytolearn- 给 joytolearn 发送悄悄话 (0 bytes) () 12/07/2019 postreply 05:12:12

他是一个well rounded 的孩子,除了必备的标考满分和10+AP之外,他的亮点在于: -加州阳光123- 给 加州阳光123 发送悄悄话 加州阳光123 的博客首页 (568 bytes) () 12/07/2019 postreply 01:03:52

His math is weak. Math Olympiad is not MO -ctrls- 给 ctrls 发送悄悄话 (0 bytes) () 12/07/2019 postreply 04:25:00

He got a math jmo -橡树生林- 给 橡树生林 发送悄悄话 (0 bytes) () 12/07/2019 postreply 06:53:00

我觉得是假的 -Ayala- 给 Ayala 发送悄悄话 (0 bytes) () 12/07/2019 postreply 08:20:59

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