Note: this was written after I was accepted so may be biased
Objective:
SAT I (breakdown): taken once, Math 800, EBRW 780, Essay 18 (6/6/6)
ACT (breakdown):
SAT II: Chinese 790, Math2 800, Chem 780
Unweighted GPA (out of 4.0): 3.9
Weighted GPA: 4.4
Rank (percentile if rank is unavailable): school doesn’t rank
AP (place score in parenthesis): 5’s: Chinese, Psych, CS A, Bio, Chem, Calc BC; 4: USH
IB (place score in parenthesis):
Senior Year Course Load: AP Lang, AP Physics 1 and 2, AP Gov/Econ, PE(lol), AP Stats
Major Awards (USAMO, Intel etc.): Accepted research abstract to a symposium, International piano competitions, TSA TEAMS Nats, NMSF
Subjective:
Extracurriculars (place leadership in parenthesis):
* Stem Cell research internship, summer + during 12
* Piano, Independent Study, 9-12
* School Engineering club (Co-Pres), 9-12
* Science Bowl(Officer), 11-12
* MIT Zero Robotics(Secretary), 10-11
Job/Work Experience: Self-employed piano teacher, 12
Volunteer/Community service: Middle school math club volunteer (Logistical Liaison, coach), 10-12
Summer Activities: 9th: CC English course; 10th CC Bio Course + TSA Nats; 11th CC Music Theory course + Research internship
Essays (rating 1-10, details):
* CommonApp: Authentic, but kinda cliche
* EC: research, very straight to the point
* Meaningful: Piano, my most “abstract” and prized essay
* IV: wrote about day to day observations and examples of how two lead to tangible projects/endeavors
* Roommate: made it thematic, used metaphor of cats
Recommendations (rating 1-10, details): note: I didn’t read any of them and don’t have a control to compare them with, so it’s pointless to score them
Teacher Rec #1: Chemistry teacher of 3 years: H Chem(10) AP Chem(11), TA(12); became very close and she said she loved seeing my personal growth
Teacher Rec #2: English 11H teacher; was a hard-working student, she offered to write it for me
Counselor Rec: helped me on many occasions, but nothing that special
Additional Rec: Research lab PI; I put in good work and she really wanted me to get in and stay in the lab
Interview: none offered to Bay Area ppl
Other
Applied for Financial Aid?: Yes
Intended Major: Biology (Music/Chem minor)
State (if domestic applicant): CA
Country (if international applicant): USA
School Type: Public
Ethnicity: Asian
Gender: Male
Income Bracket: prefer not to say
Hooks (URM, first generation college, etc.): none
Reflection
Strengths: Music live audition, continued research into the school year, I liked my Stanford supplements
Weaknesses: some extracurriculars didn’t connect to my intended major
Why you think you were accepted/waitlisted/rejected: not sure but luck definitely had something to do with it
Where else were you accepted/waitlisted/rejected: nowhere atm
General Comments:
still in shock, this is so surreal
My advice:
* Get your Common App essay done ASAP(getting mine done before summer ended relieve tons of pressure)
* Be authentic and don’t write contrived bs aimed towards pleasing ao's
* Understand that model essays that you might find out there are definitely not the norm; I can’t write well so I instead focused my efforts on the content
Good luck to all!