1,3 句押韵（it, lit; heart, apart) ， 2，4 句押韵(me, key; for, door).

My mother's heart has so much pearl in it,
 She did so much before the world knew me.
 Her love for me grew into a tree, lit (lit 写在这行为了押韵）
 Up by a flame, blazing bright with a key.

The key unlocked my baby, loveless heart.
 It taught me to pity and to feel for.
 Holding on to my key, never apart,
 Always together, joined by open doors.
 
In the neighborhood, strolling down the lane,
 Hands in hand, she showed me the good and bad.
 Like Tai Chi, black and white, friends aren't the same.
 Her words engraved in my mind, I was glad.

所有跟帖： 

• 天那,我对自己真是够无语. -yisu- ♀ (0 bytes) () 11/08/2012 postreply 08:31:40

• 我以为是随便写,感觉挺美,原来有原因 -yisu- ♀ (0 bytes) () 11/08/2012 postreply 08:32:48

• 应该为你女儿骄傲。 -湘西山民- ♂ (114 bytes) () 11/08/2012 postreply 08:37:07

• 好,为她骄傲, 当妈真不容易 -yisu- ♀ (0 bytes) () 11/08/2012 postreply 08:43:28