女儿的作文差点让老师哭了

大宝兴冲冲回家，交给我一张老师的小条子：

xxx wrote the most amazing story today in Language Arts. I almost cried, it was so wonderful!  --Ms.C

大宝迫不及待地递给我她的作文，还自己读了一遍。大家看看,有点意思哈。

           All about snow

Snow is white, in winter snow, where Bear hibernates, with the bird migrates. 

The north wind blows,kids come out to play, with friends & parents watch for safety.

All children say good-bye to Novermber & say "hello" to December! When winters gone they feel sad. But don't worry, school's here! 

Whoo hoo! 

这老师也太夸张了吧。

所有跟帖： 

• PG -又当爹来又当妈- ♀ (11 bytes) () 12/06/2011 postreply 18:39:29

• 简单勾列了一幅秋冬情景，由大及小，有景有情，简洁优美，触及老师小时候的记忆了 -洲河- ♀ (0 bytes) () 12/06/2011 postreply 19:04:16

• 枯藤老树昏鸦，这老师得哭晕过去了 -mooseamoose- ♂ (0 bytes) () 12/06/2011 postreply 19:11:37

• 栩栩如生！ -lucky8910- ♀ (0 bytes) () 12/06/2011 postreply 19:14:47

• 几年纪啊? 写得真好, 俺都要哭了. -wangchinese- ♀ (0 bytes) () 12/06/2011 postreply 19:42:11

• 回复：女儿的作文差点让老师哭了@文中含着一幅图，真行， -波雨中- ♀ (0 bytes) () 12/06/2011 postreply 19:54:27

• 大家过奖了。不过是孩子信手写来。大家见笑了 -memeyin- ♀ (0 bytes) () 12/06/2011 postreply 20:37:46

• 又一个文豪出世啦。。。；0） -74xiongmao- ♀ (0 bytes) () 12/06/2011 postreply 21:47:57

• 小孩多大?如果是K,老师会哭.是6年级,老师也会.for diff reasons... -weston- ♀ (0 bytes) () 12/06/2011 postreply 23:42:10

• 逗. 哈哈哈~ -light.blue- ♀ (0 bytes) () 12/07/2011 postreply 06:44:59

• :DDDDDDDDDDDDDD -MMXIAO- ♀ (0 bytes) () 12/07/2011 postreply 06:45:30

• 是写得不错啊! -MMXIAO- ♀ (0 bytes) () 12/07/2011 postreply 06:47:00