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问好诗友!这几句意境不错,将平仄韵脚稍作裁剪调整,可成一阕《南歌子》:
-山水苍茫-
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05/26/2024 postreply
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山水君大安!
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05/27/2024 postreply
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多日不见,问好薇薇君!
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05/28/2024 postreply
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