讚，詩和朗诵都好。

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回答: 窗外的牧场【配乐诗】 由 snowandlotus 于 2024-04-23 17:35:35

This poem is a good example that it needs no false drama to make poetry. As a reader I felt poetry start to enter gently with these lines: 

山前有一排树。雨来过，松鼠来过

青山之外，是河流，你看不见

Lin Mu is a good poet, but his recent works seemed to have declined in quality since he joined the  小团伙 led by jinjiao and dancingwolf and ...

嘻嘻

 

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