你的詩寫得太扭捏了。

来源: 中间小谢 于 2024-03-24 10:47:20 [] [旧帖] [给我悄悄话] 阅读数 : (266 bytes)
回答: 苍茫三体 · 荒漠 孤烟 无人区 由 老键 于 2024-03-24 04:36:33

You can't create poetry by twisting what is lacking it.

Linmu's piece below is good, mainly due to the idea of the end line, which carries poetry in itself, therefore it can be put out straightforward without any twisting.

 

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