贴一个歌词样的 between your wrinkles 和尿盆里的倒影

Between your wrinkles

When I heard cloud’s cries,
spring breeze blurred my eyes.
I saw wrinkles on your face,
in the willow-stroked lake.
Your eyes shone like starry skies,
your smile woke me like sunrise. 
But I was foolish to chase,
and catch a fleeting snowflake.

When I hear my heart’s cries,
time breeze blurs my eyes.
I see wrinkles on your face,
years after my heartbreak.
I think I have grown wise,
can see true love through disguise.
But love leaves me without trace,
every morning after I awake.

Oh my love,
wandered between your wrinkles then.
Oh my love,
wanders between your wrinkles now.

所有跟帖： 

• 谢谢颤音兄。尿盆的确值得深思。 -立- ♀ (0 bytes) () 12/17/2020 postreply 14:36:52

• 我真应该在家摆一个尿盆，再贴上颤音兄的诗。我也应该写一个。过去我是否定杜尚的。近来观点完全变了。 -立- ♀ (0 bytes) () 12/17/2020 postreply 14:38:03

• 唉，中文真的有局限。如果你我兄弟是英文的母语，现在也混成诗人了。可现在只有反动派嘲笑诗人是，立才是诗人。领月饼是没人承认立是诗人 -立- ♀ (0 bytes) () 12/17/2020 postreply 14:39:49

• 美～ -花菜- ♀ (0 bytes) () 12/17/2020 postreply 15:51:05

• 雖然不喜歡讀英文，不過這貼的英文比中文美~~~ -雪晶- ♀ (0 bytes) () 12/17/2020 postreply 18:20:37

• 押韵压得好稳准，像来自一个世纪前的sentimento -何仙姑- ♀ (0 bytes) () 12/17/2020 postreply 18:22:13

• 真美啊！ -.川晔- ♀ (0 bytes) () 12/17/2020 postreply 22:24:18

• 理科生柔情起来真了不得 :） 诗很美。 -简丹儿- ♀ (0 bytes) () 12/18/2020 postreply 03:51:53