女性写婚恋题材总是很细腻,但文字中能看到审美观的差异.
MM的文字简洁清澈,喜欢.
小说故事也紧凑.只是觉得结尾又点落俗套和简单化了.
处女作写成这样,真的该鼓掌. 加油!
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再谢谢姐姐!对,简单化了点儿,火车到站了不是:-))
-另一只眼看中国-
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