凑热闹， 乱译里尔克之秋日

Day in Autumn

BY RAINER MARIA RILKE

TRANSLATED BY MARY KINZIE

 

After the summer's yield, Lord, it is time

to let your shadow lengthen on the sundials

and in the pastures let the rough winds fly.

 

As for the final fruits, coax them to roundness.

Direct on them two days of warmer light

to hale them golden toward their term, and harry

the last few drops of sweetness through the wine.

 

Whoever's homeless now, will build no shelter;

who lives alone will live indefinitely so,

waking up to read a little, draft long letters,   

and, along the city's avenues,

fitfully wander, when the wild leaves loosen.

 

秋日的祈祷

 

神圣吾主

夏盛已逝

秋日渐长

草仍绿

风已凉

 

吾主慈悲

再赐暖光

果尽满

蜜琼浆

 

建屋为时晚

孤独人惆怅

难眠夜，书乡愁

秋叶落，独彷徨

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• 哈哈，倒是很简洁了。。。 -尘凡无忧- ♀ (0 bytes) () 02/22/2022 postreply 08:52:46

• 肚中无货，只好惜字如金了 ：） -心存善念- ♀ (0 bytes) () 02/22/2022 postreply 08:56:23

• 很优美的译文！学习了。 -小雨如酥- ♀ (0 bytes) () 02/22/2022 postreply 12:06:19

• 多谢小雨！我这都是瞎弄来玩儿的，大家见笑了 -心存善念- ♀ (0 bytes) () 02/22/2022 postreply 13:00:00

• 好词！ -EuphoriaF- ♀ (0 bytes) () 02/22/2022 postreply 13:16:11

• 多谢！受你启发， 所以凑个热闹。献丑了：） -心存善念- ♀ (0 bytes) () 02/22/2022 postreply 15:20:56

• 确实简洁，有点古韵 -浮云驰- ♀ (0 bytes) () 02/22/2022 postreply 14:07:53

• 有点古韵+1 -cxyz- ♀ (0 bytes) () 02/22/2022 postreply 14:20:47

• 见笑，还得跟你们多学点 -心存善念- ♀ (0 bytes) () 02/22/2022 postreply 15:21:47