来几句没话找话说的梨花体馅饼

Twilight and shadow
 
In the moment before sunrise
Creatures are bathed by twilight
Free
Not pulled by their shadows

Creatures are showered by the sun
Drag their shadows and wander

In the moment after sunset
Creatures are bathed by twilight
Free
No longer pulled by their shadows


vague interpretation of light and shadow ©  25 days ago,    vaguely spiritual   
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Jenny Middleton - I like the way the imagery in the two stanzas of this  poem works like mirror images of each other. Good share  3 days ago   x rate:  ,  ,    skip

 

Mazterpeace - Very well written!!! Starting and ending the poem with the same verse is my type of poetry. Takes skill!!! Kudos!!!

Nicely done 25 days ago   x rate:  ,  ,    skip

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挺好的。这叫梨花体?我好像见过这词儿没见识过实物 -donau- 给 donau 发送悄悄话 donau 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 01/11/2022 postreply 22:41:46

-望沙- 给 望沙 发送悄悄话 望沙 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 01/12/2022 postreply 03:51:15

这个不梨啊。:) -尘凡无忧- 给 尘凡无忧 发送悄悄话 尘凡无忧 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 01/12/2022 postreply 06:05:00

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