其实呢，是挺好实现的：）秘诀是不能用“讲故事”的方法写书，而是用“拍电影”的角度来写。因为讲故事以“叙述”为主，他今天

干了啥，她又干了啥。而电影，肯定是要大量的对话，甚至包括打斗戏。

举个例子，黑客帝国里史密斯每次同男主重点打戏，开头都会有非常精彩的对话。如果没了对话，就剩下后面的打斗，这部电影的艺术成就至少要削去一半。

“Why, Mr. Anderson?, Why, why?.
Why do you do it? Why, why get up?.
Why keep fighting?.
Do you believe you're fighting...for something?.
For more than your survival?.
Can you tell me what it is?.
Do you even know?; Is it freedom?, Or truth?.
Perhaps peace?. Could it be for love?

Illusions, Mr. Anderson.
Vagaries of perception.

找着感觉了吧

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