红豆浆
倘若红豆磨成浆,
入口一定特别香。
莫向前尘寻旧事,
半生风雨,半生不熟,相思梦一场。
:)
冲数的诗
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也不知道,写的算不算是诗。不过读起来,有点上头
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03/10/2026 postreply
15:51:38
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半生风雨,半生不熟,相思梦一场。好句!建议“滥竽充数”改为“金句传神”(滥竽对金句,充数对传神)。
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03/10/2026 postreply
19:06:32
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写着好玩的,大家开心就好
-滥竽冲数-
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03/11/2026 postreply
03:49:54
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