From Left To Right 俺歌词，其他suno创作

From Left To Right

 

Verse 1

Me twenty, you eighteen

in a picture black n white

Me stripe polo, you plaid shirt

Our faces lit by gentle twilight

To your left my tender chest

Soaked in your warm smile

My right arm around your shoulders

and lost in your sparkling eyes

 

Verse 2

My hairs gray, yours brown

in a picture colored by time

Me black tux, you blue gown

Our wrinkles blurred by hazy light

To your right my scarred chest

Soaked in your warm smile

My left arm around your shoulders

and lost in your sparkling eyes

 

Prechorus

Black n white fade into colors

when we meet and sigh

Time flies by

and leaves one knot to tie

 

Chorus

Through bends, breaks, and mends

through each other we walk

That’s how our journey ends

How our fates cross and talk

所有跟帖： 

• 哪个版好听？ -颤音- ♂ (0 bytes) () 03/15/2025 postreply 10:32:52

• See inside -nearby- ♂ (361 bytes) () 03/15/2025 postreply 10:48:34

• 谢谢邻兄，虽然我request soft rock， folk，看来歌词让suno加了jazz味 -颤音- ♂ (0 bytes) () 03/15/2025 postreply 10:50:50

• 我自己感觉第三最好，最喜欢。不知道忧儿作何评论，她内行我外行 -nearby- ♂ (0 bytes) () 03/15/2025 postreply 10:55:10

• 谢谢，第3是soft rock，grok推荐的，赞 -颤音- ♂ (0 bytes) () 03/15/2025 postreply 10:57:32

• grok其实也不错，我用过两次。这些AI里面，google的要差一点，虽然我看好google -nearby- ♂ (0 bytes) () 03/15/2025 postreply 11:00:22

• 觉得grok好像稍好于gpt，没玩过Google家的 -颤音- ♂ (0 bytes) () 03/15/2025 postreply 11:10:18

• 再点赞一次。再发个评论：写歌词真的与写诗不一样，英文的又更不一样，佩服！ -nearby- ♂ (0 bytes) () 03/15/2025 postreply 10:53:45

• 谢谢谬赞，感觉需要把诗tweak一些，歌词可能ai写起来容易，因为模式化 -颤音- ♂ (0 bytes) () 03/15/2025 postreply 10:58:52

• 这句Time flies by and leaves one knot to tie其实也可以作收尾的高潮句，个见哈 -nearby- ♂ (0 bytes) () 03/15/2025 postreply 10:58:46

• good point, 把prechorus和chorus对调 ：D -颤音- ♂ (0 bytes) () 03/15/2025 postreply 11:00:03

• 仿一个:从西到东 -看海阔天空- ♂ (146 bytes) () 03/15/2025 postreply 11:20:19

• 有唱中文的吗？比较唱功，容易些。哈！ -lovecat08- ♀ (0 bytes) () 03/15/2025 postreply 12:18:47

• nearby和颤音，已成了【AI知音】啦！ -lovecat08- ♀ (0 bytes) () 03/15/2025 postreply 12:21:33

• 这两ID，到底是颤音还是颤音AI, 是nearly 还是nearbyAI， 没人能够分清楚 -看海阔天空- ♂ (0 bytes) () 03/15/2025 postreply 14:07:30

• 哈哈哈，我的id有快10年来，那时ai还是妈妈肚子里 -颤音- ♂ (0 bytes) () 03/15/2025 postreply 14:11:10

• 这个创意好 -颤音- ♂ (0 bytes) () 03/15/2025 postreply 14:11:39

• 这么多。。。选择困难症犯了。~ -尘凡无忧- ♀ (0 bytes) () 03/15/2025 postreply 18:43:32

• Cool! -EuphoriaF- ♀ (0 bytes) () 03/16/2025 postreply 10:24:00