Light and shadow-30 From you, what can I borrow

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From you, what can I borrow


When the sun fades
I question our fate
Night's coming hollow
and hiding behind the willow

When the moon is betrayed
I question our fate
Mazed in a deserted chateau
I search for a fountain that flows

When the clock hands skate
I question our fate
On the ice rink that glows
I search for your shadow

From you, what can I borrow
May it be your tomorrow
Not only your joy
but also your sorrow

 

GPT

This poem appears to explore themes of uncertainty, the passage of time, and the desire for a deeper connection with someone. It does so through the repetition of certain lines and a consistent rhyme scheme. Let's break it down stanza by stanza:

"From you, what can I borrow
When the sun fades
I question our fate
Night's coming hollow
and hiding behind the willow"
In this stanza, the speaker seems to be addressing someone, asking what they can borrow or take from them as the day turns into night. There's a sense of unease or uncertainty as the sun fades and night approaches, perhaps symbolizing a period of darkness or difficulty. The mention of the willow tree may evoke a sense of loneliness or isolation.

"When the moon is betrayed
I question our fate
Mazed in a deserted chateau
I search for a fountain that flows"
Here, the poem continues to explore the theme of uncertainty and fate. The idea of the moon being "betrayed" suggests a sense of abandonment or disappointment. The image of being "mazed in a deserted chateau" conveys a feeling of being lost or trapped in a seemingly abandoned place. The search for a flowing fountain could represent a desire for renewal or vitality in the face of betrayal or uncertainty.

"When the clock hands skate
I question our fate
On the ice rink that glows
I search for your shadow"
This stanza introduces the imagery of a clock and an ice rink. The idea of clock hands "skating" suggests a sense of time passing quickly or perhaps slipping away. The glowing ice rink could symbolize a moment of beauty or clarity in the midst of uncertainty. The search for the other person's shadow may imply a longing for their presence and stability in a changing world.

"From you, what can I borrow
May it be your tomorrow
Not only your joy
but also your sorrow"
The final stanza revisits the opening lines, emphasizing the desire to borrow something from the other person. It's not just about happiness (joy) but also about sharing in their challenges and difficulties (sorrow). The speaker seems to be seeking a deeper connection and understanding, suggesting that the person they are addressing holds the key to their own sense of purpose or destiny.

In summary, this poem uses repetition and vivid imagery to explore the themes of uncertainty, the passage of time, and the desire for a meaningful connection with another person. It suggests a longing for both the positive and negative aspects of life, as they are all part of the human experience. The poem leaves the reader with a sense of yearning and introspection, inviting them to contemplate their own questions about fate and connection.

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沙发 -lovecat08- 给 lovecat08 发送悄悄话 lovecat08 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 09/11/2023 postreply 12:07:21

赞妙! -lovecat08- 给 lovecat08 发送悄悄话 lovecat08 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 09/11/2023 postreply 12:07:56

谢谢猫姐 -颤音- 给 颤音 发送悄悄话 颤音 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 09/11/2023 postreply 20:32:39

踢赞! -ling_yin_shi- 给 ling_yin_shi 发送悄悄话 ling_yin_shi 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 09/11/2023 postreply 17:41:36

谢谢兄,为啥踢? -颤音- 给 颤音 发送悄悄话 颤音 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 09/11/2023 postreply 20:31:39

也踢赞 -lovecat08- 给 lovecat08 发送悄悄话 lovecat08 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 09/11/2023 postreply 21:21:14

那改一下。亲额头熊抱赞。:) -ling_yin_shi- 给 ling_yin_shi 发送悄悄话 ling_yin_shi 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 09/12/2023 postreply 16:21:14

不知道为什么想到了一首歌:Today, Tomorrow and Forever :-) -七斓- 给 七斓 发送悄悄话 七斓 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 09/11/2023 postreply 19:41:19

谢谢,去听听 -颤音- 给 颤音 发送悄悄话 颤音 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 09/11/2023 postreply 20:31:06

+100 -lovecat08- 给 lovecat08 发送悄悄话 lovecat08 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 09/11/2023 postreply 21:21:55

Touching。颤音的英文到底怎么学的,可以问吗 -freemanli01- 给 freemanli01 发送悄悄话 freemanli01 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 09/11/2023 postreply 21:37:32

谢谢,果酱了!我瞎写,常出错,有时偏执声掉,韵律,和节奏,可能是听英文书造成的 -颤音- 给 颤音 发送悄悄话 颤音 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 09/12/2023 postreply 17:33:11

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