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Half light, half shadow


Half light, half shadow
printed on my espresso
Light is bitter and shadow is sweet
Half shadow, half light
printed on my let-go kite
Shadow is shallow and light is deep


© Jul 9 life   
 

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Likes: Sand Singer, kaye, Jonathan Moya, Netra Gautam, Manizd, Awesomax, DMLane, Poetry for Jane, Under the Rainbow, MargrietVries, The bravest fall, Ilovesatorugojo

Netra Gautam - This poem is a beautiful reflection of the human experience. Your mastery of language and ability to capture the essence of life is truly remarkable. Your words are a source of comfort and inspiration.

6 hours ago   

 

Busy - I see what you mean that light is a better experience than the dark. But still the dark has to be understood and mapped. Modernism is full of the dark emotion. Such as understanding of the various nothingnesses. All our emotions mean a lot.

Amazing!

Sep 9   

Alexisinwv - I love the contrast! It really completes the poem! Keep writing poetry!

Sep 9   

kaye - Amazing words in their energy.

The feeling to this is a signature of art in letting your craft guide the ink.

Congratulations on fpp.

Sep 9   

Under the Rainbow - Lovely words and easy reading

Sep 9   

The bravest fall - Interesting thoughts about shadows. I like the "Light is bitter and shadow sweet."

Nicely penned.

Sep 9   

Awesomax - I like this!

Jul 9   




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好,颤颤继续加油,颤起来。:) -ling_yin_shi- 给 ling_yin_shi 发送悄悄话 ling_yin_shi 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 09/10/2023 postreply 17:13:27

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Good poem! Thought provoking!Maybe deep things -天玉之- 给 天玉之 发送悄悄话 天玉之 的博客首页 (183 bytes) () 09/10/2023 postreply 17:23:40

谢谢,的确, 喜欢的一句话, to be beautifully flawed -颤音- 给 颤音 发送悄悄话 颤音 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 09/10/2023 postreply 21:26:04

Love it! How true! -天玉之- 给 天玉之 发送悄悄话 天玉之 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 09/11/2023 postreply 06:21:26

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努力,有成果了。 -lovecat08- 给 lovecat08 发送悄悄话 lovecat08 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 09/10/2023 postreply 17:59:09

谢谢喵! -颤音- 给 颤音 发送悄悄话 颤音 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 09/10/2023 postreply 21:26:21

喝出诗来,没喝高,飞的高。 -AP33912- 给 AP33912 发送悄悄话 AP33912 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 09/10/2023 postreply 18:54:00

嗯,该多喝,写难做到 -颤音- 给 颤音 发送悄悄话 颤音 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 09/10/2023 postreply 21:26:58

有光有影,祝贺祝贺! -七斓- 给 七斓 发送悄悄话 七斓 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 09/10/2023 postreply 19:52:33

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光影一生,苦乐参半,打动人心。。。。 -花似鹿葱- 给 花似鹿葱 发送悄悄话 花似鹿葱 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 09/11/2023 postreply 05:06:04

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