Many a me 在英文诗歌网站上首页 显摆一把

好玩的是这个网站是个电脑高手弄的，他弄了个给诗歌打分的，按照分数置顶，不过他也“优化”他的打分系统。最新版给的分数和老板几乎180度转弯。这个是近一年前写的，那时分数很低的，新版来了，竟然置顶了。哈哈哈。

 

Many a Me

Many a Me
drowned in your eyes
roll down your face
and fall onto my palms
cold and warm
Seep through my fingers
drop by drop
vanish into the soil
© Oct '22

Likes: kevin, MissHexxx, kaye, Autumnhope2, Shidare, Ken Doll, Apollo Silvercrest, Frélancér, Denis Blazevic, Soulstice1, Jackybee, Beyonder, Cam., Busy, AbelBPoetry, Roha

 

Shidare - It sounds like the beautiful song of a teardrop.... Singing of the melancholic life of its own kind. The rythym... very soothing and easy. Beautiful precious one
6 hours ago

Busy - Fantastic poem. I can relate to it well. Keep going
8 hours ago

Busy - Interpretation first put forward by the profound german philosopher professor martin Heidegger. Or was it Nietzsche before him. I dunno! Lol
7 hours ago

Busy - But lol this is but my interpretation of the poem. Sorry if it is miles out.
7 hours ago

Busy - We all get sanded down and vanished like pieces of wood lol in Zen I think they call it the lacquer barrel but I am not sure. But I had a friend a few years ago telling me about it. You never know it may be a universal! But as a particular it related to me anyway. Great poem.
7 hours ago

 

 

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• 祝贺登顶！ -花似鹿葱- ♀ (0 bytes) () 08/09/2023 postreply 08:05:27

• 祝贺攻占光明顶！让敌人们颤抖去吧~~~ -kirn- ♀ (0 bytes) () 08/09/2023 postreply 08:09:01

• 颤颤自颤呢！ -花似鹿葱- ♀ (0 bytes) () 08/09/2023 postreply 08:46:11

• 套用刘晓波的名言，我没有敌人，哈哈哈 -颤音- ♂ (0 bytes) () 08/09/2023 postreply 14:16:24

• 哈哈哈，就是好玩 -颤音- ♂ (0 bytes) () 08/09/2023 postreply 14:15:51

• 颤音的投入很特别特色，想起张宗昌的诗 -freemanli01- ♂ (2191 bytes) () 08/09/2023 postreply 10:51:40

• 自由人联想丰富，哈哈哈，不过这蛤蟆诗生动上口 -颤音- ♂ (0 bytes) () 08/09/2023 postreply 14:17:20

• 哈哈，这个其实蛮有文化， -ling_yin_shi- ♂ (1146 bytes) () 08/09/2023 postreply 17:50:07

• 老张真是有让人喜欢的地方，最少来说吧，人家就信老天造人，是让人活得高兴的。 -freemanli01- ♂ (0 bytes) () 08/09/2023 postreply 18:12:51

• 哈哈哈，妙 -颤音- ♂ (0 bytes) () 08/09/2023 postreply 19:23:33

• 慢慢地，从一些诗歌里，能体会一些生命的东西。诗心、天真。投入，又不是现代企业文化里所说的发疯般的“投入” -freemanli01- ♂ (116 bytes) () 08/09/2023 postreply 18:06:41

• 想到什么写什么就好，Dickinson 好像活着的时候写的都是给自己看的，绝大多数都没发表过 -颤音- ♂ (0 bytes) () 08/09/2023 postreply 19:24:26

• 奇妙！ -lovecat08- ♀ (0 bytes) () 08/09/2023 postreply 12:04:28

• 谢谢喵 -颤音- ♂ (0 bytes) () 08/09/2023 postreply 14:17:31

• 很棒。颤颤继续Tears Down Heart Up. -ling_yin_shi- ♂ (0 bytes) () 08/09/2023 postreply 17:37:37

• 谢谢，hearts down，too，哈哈哈 -颤音- ♂ (0 bytes) () 08/09/2023 postreply 19:26:21

• Ups/downs/That's life, young man. 大学英文老师教的第一句诗。 -ling_yin_shi- ♂ (0 bytes) () 08/09/2023 postreply 22:45:33

• 牛！ -西东人8- ♂ (0 bytes) () 08/09/2023 postreply 19:20:51

• 谢谢西东兄！ -颤音- ♂ (0 bytes) () 08/09/2023 postreply 19:26:52

• 热烈祝贺。。。您在说消逝的爱情吗？ -唐宋韵- ♂ (0 bytes) () 08/09/2023 postreply 20:39:00

• 谢谢，本意如此 ：-） -颤音- ♂ (0 bytes) () 08/09/2023 postreply 22:08:15