【热夏生活随笔】 Salty mist from the Pacific

Salty mist from the Pacific

Salty mist from the Pacific
coats our pickup that's crustific
diffuses in your glass of wine
and wets your lips and mine

Salty breeze from the Pacific
seasons air for the specific
for our aged kisses that still shine
for our hearts that still intertwine

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• Wet 改成 Sweeten, interwine 改成 Twine 会不会好些？：） -ling_yin_shi- ♂ (0 bytes) () 07/25/2023 postreply 21:24:58

• 灵隐兄真sweet ：-）谢谢，这个我没有一个清楚的画面和情绪的感觉，很模糊的瞎写 -颤音- ♂ (0 bytes) () 07/25/2023 postreply 21:29:41

• 谦了。：） -ling_yin_shi- ♂ (0 bytes) () 07/25/2023 postreply 22:48:22

• 模糊瞎写，不就很mist？ -lovecat08- ♀ (0 bytes) () 07/26/2023 postreply 03:24:17

• 早安，书香！ -lovecat08- ♀ (0 bytes) () 07/26/2023 postreply 03:22:44

• 爱猫早安 -颤音- ♂ (0 bytes) () 07/26/2023 postreply 08:39:10

• 哈哈，我真心的和你说啊，盐是苦咸的，可以把酸的PH值中和一下下~~ -kirn- ♀ (0 bytes) () 07/26/2023 postreply 05:01:51

• 对头，甜的也是酸的，还是咸的好 -颤音- ♂ (0 bytes) () 07/26/2023 postreply 08:39:53

• 给太平洋的晚帖问个早安！ -花似鹿葱- ♀ (0 bytes) () 07/26/2023 postreply 05:19:24

• 灵灵，这回你老实了，咸味是个体的味道，甜味是众人的味道。这是颤颤独享。。。。 -花似鹿葱- ♀ (0 bytes) () 07/26/2023 postreply 06:00:35

• 哈哈哈，早晨好 -颤音- ♂ (0 bytes) () 07/26/2023 postreply 08:40:25

• 大洋彼岸，原来不是我所靠近的大洋 -冯墟- ♂ (0 bytes) () 07/26/2023 postreply 09:19:22