[ it never fails to take me in ]

[ it never fails to take me in ]

 
it never fails to take me in
vast dark orange sky
over a misty sea
within, the great also the last fire
of a setting sun

then the burnt ashes
then night falls
then Emptiness defeats serenity 
then Sadness draws me in
without my full knowledge
...

it’s one day in January of 2023
it could be someday before we invented time
it could be someday years later
after we’re buried in time



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沙发 -lovecat08- 给 lovecat08 发送悄悄话 lovecat08 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 01/16/2023 postreply 11:10:38

好美,最后的辉煌最美,太阳燃烧生命,我们也是 -浮云驰- 给 浮云驰 发送悄悄话 浮云驰 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 01/16/2023 postreply 12:06:38

气势恢宏,意义深远。 -梧桐之丘- 给 梧桐之丘 发送悄悄话 梧桐之丘 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 01/16/2023 postreply 14:27:32

好诗要赞! -梧桐之丘- 给 梧桐之丘 发送悄悄话 梧桐之丘 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 01/16/2023 postreply 14:28:08

谢谢各位的阅读与留言。 -影云- 给 影云 发送悄悄话 影云 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 01/17/2023 postreply 14:06:22

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