my grandfather

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my grandfather

 
my grandfather
died of a cold rain
in the early spring of 1965, he carried
produces he grew and saved for months
and walked thirty miles of mountain roads to the train station
he was going to the city to visit his only daughter
it rained halfway
he did not have an umbrella
he did not turn back either

later
his daughter accompanied him back home because he got sick from the rain
the sky cleared up each day, but the lights in his eyes
dimmed  away day by day
I had never seen my grandfather
neither did my mother
he left no photo of him  at all

some sunny afternoon
my father put down his paintbrush
looking at the mountains in the distance, (as if) talking
to himself -
your grandpa was a very quiet person
on a sunny day like this, he would sit in the fields
and take a sunbath

one night
I was sitting in my car and the world
was disappearing in the pouring rain
where I saw my grandfather
carry his baggage and
walk in the rain

 

 


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Very good. Images clean and fusing well -中间小谢- 给 中间小谢 发送悄悄话 (47 bytes) () 01/11/2023 postreply 10:40:26

Thank you xiao xie. -影云- 给 影云 发送悄悄话 影云 的博客首页 (28 bytes) () 01/11/2023 postreply 10:50:14

感人至深,情义满满。dimed=dimmed -梧桐之丘- 给 梧桐之丘 发送悄悄话 梧桐之丘 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 01/11/2023 postreply 12:20:59

Good catch. Thank you. -影云- 给 影云 发送悄悄话 影云 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 01/11/2023 postreply 12:31:16

小小笔误而已。再读一遍,写得真好。 -梧桐之丘- 给 梧桐之丘 发送悄悄话 梧桐之丘 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 01/11/2023 postreply 12:40:28

这个抓的太好了。要不意思相差十万八千里:)谢谢。 -影云- 给 影云 发送悄悄话 影云 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 01/11/2023 postreply 16:08:06

有散文诗的感觉,父爱满满 -浮云驰- 给 浮云驰 发送悄悄话 浮云驰 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 01/11/2023 postreply 14:35:21

谢谢浮云。 -影云- 给 影云 发送悄悄话 影云 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 01/11/2023 postreply 16:07:19

棒外公。应该凭直觉动手画一幅。:) -ling_yin_shi- 给 ling_yin_shi 发送悄悄话 ling_yin_shi 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 01/11/2023 postreply 16:04:00

是爷爷。我外公的照片太多了。:) -影云- 给 影云 发送悄悄话 影云 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 01/11/2023 postreply 16:06:51

突然忘了问好。嘿,很久不见。新年好。 -影云- 给 影云 发送悄悄话 影云 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 01/11/2023 postreply 16:08:44

影云兔年好。:) -ling_yin_shi- 给 ling_yin_shi 发送悄悄话 ling_yin_shi 的博客首页 (30 bytes) () 01/11/2023 postreply 17:04:20

Very touching. . . -小二哥李白- 给 小二哥李白 发送悄悄话 小二哥李白 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 01/11/2023 postreply 18:28:33

谢谢阅读与留言。 -影云- 给 影云 发送悄悄话 影云 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 01/12/2023 postreply 12:50:26

this is outstanding poetic prose. salute to the author -leslieking- 给 leslieking 发送悄悄话 (0 bytes) () 01/12/2023 postreply 07:42:00

Thank you for your encouraging comments. -影云- 给 影云 发送悄悄话 影云 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 01/12/2023 postreply 12:50:54

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