Ice jingle

本帖于 2023-01-02 09:53:53 时间, 由普通用户 冯墟 编辑

Hello my friend, if

you come to me in winter time

I will bring you near the outlet of an ancient pond

where the sun never shines

We will see the wind-driven ripples superimposed on

             the current from the inlet to the outlet

             break the thin ice apart into pieces

             and make them jingle

That is the music I want to share

 

On a calmer day, however,

the ice was solid

you barely saw the ripples

much less the water flow

The pond looked still

             as calm, as senile, as an old monk’s face

Who knew the old monk was composing and

             rehearsing in the quiet place

             in stillness there was a song

 

20230101

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冯兄好情调,也来写英文诗了,有味道, -nearby- 给 nearby 发送悄悄话 nearby 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 01/02/2023 postreply 10:41:25

成年之后,很少写诗。最近又开始写了,莫名其妙。 -冯墟- 给 冯墟 发送悄悄话 冯墟 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 01/02/2023 postreply 10:56:42

最后一句最好,却不是我写的,我只改了时态,原作者为Charlotte Sorenson。 -冯墟- 给 冯墟 发送悄悄话 冯墟 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 01/02/2023 postreply 11:00:24

确实是ice jingle 的声音 -nearby- 给 nearby 发送悄悄话 nearby 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 01/02/2023 postreply 10:41:57

录音中噪音太大,现场听是很清脆的、冰块相撞的声音。 -冯墟- 给 冯墟 发送悄悄话 冯墟 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 01/02/2023 postreply 10:55:48

邻兄是诗人,你们两人讨论,也让我学习了。冯兄新年好! -梧桐之丘- 给 梧桐之丘 发送悄悄话 梧桐之丘 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 01/02/2023 postreply 13:27:05

丘兄新年好! -冯墟- 给 冯墟 发送悄悄话 冯墟 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 01/02/2023 postreply 13:32:50

但是写诗只能学邻兄。 -冯墟- 给 冯墟 发送悄悄话 冯墟 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 01/02/2023 postreply 13:39:39

说得我很惶恐 -nearby- 给 nearby 发送悄悄话 nearby 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 01/02/2023 postreply 16:31:35

平衡一下,诗都是撩妹的。哈哈哈哈哈哈哈哈 我知道邻兄是严肃的。 -冯墟- 给 冯墟 发送悄悄话 冯墟 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 01/02/2023 postreply 16:41:25

请冯兄写一首到书香来撩撩 :-) 娱乐 -nearby- 给 nearby 发送悄悄话 nearby 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 01/02/2023 postreply 16:50:05

等等看 -冯墟- 给 冯墟 发送悄悄话 冯墟 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 01/02/2023 postreply 16:57:40

感觉到很真诚,有温度! -浮云驰- 给 浮云驰 发送悄悄话 浮云驰 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 01/02/2023 postreply 14:19:15

浮云新年好!按本地标准,昨天确实比较暖和。您咋知道的?嘿嘿 -冯墟- 给 冯墟 发送悄悄话 冯墟 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 01/02/2023 postreply 15:02:50

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