俺看不出“诗眼”在哪儿?大概诗人才有眼看出!

回答: 谢谢!拙句正是所谓“诗眼”。renqiulan2022-12-23 15:16:14

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.咱们洋人说的 punch line. -renqiulan- 给 renqiulan 发送悄悄话 (0 bytes) () 12/23/2022 postreply 15:48:24

A punch in the eye -中间小谢- 给 中间小谢 发送悄悄话 (230 bytes) () 12/23/2022 postreply 18:59:48

Point taken.Thanks! Yes, it isn't very easy on the eyes. -renqiulan- 给 renqiulan 发送悄悄话 (0 bytes) () 12/23/2022 postreply 19:16:20

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